Bentelador
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Benteladora month agoReplied to abshkaHere brotha 我在综漫写日记 https://www.69shuba.com/book/52096.htm
- Benteladora month agoReplied to Bentelador
ye, my grammar is shit
- Benteladora month agoPosted
This fic is a good slow burn for me. I love how the author portrays different characters outside of their story. The translation and revised version compared to the raw (the raw is unbearable for me, fr fr) make me love the power of the MC in the LoTM setting. For the writing quality, it's good and readable for me, as English is not my first language. Story development, like I said, is slow burn, so don't expect a fast-paced story. This pace is a good break for me. Character design is good. It's interesting how the characters act outside their story what choices they make and the consequences of their actions. Update stability: I NEED MORE. Lastly, the world background is not bad. The world-building is still incomplete, as it's a mashup of different kinds of anime, but it's still good. In conclusion, I recommend this story if you're looking for a slow-paced fic. It's obvious this fic is going to be a harem, so don't yap about why it's a harem. Ch. 82
- Benteladora month agoReplied to Bentelador
ye my grammar is shit
- Bentelador2 months agoCommented
+1
- Bentelador5 months agoReplied to Goat13This book has been deleted.
- Bentelador5 months agoReplied to Run_tay
- Bentelador6 months agoReplied to free_spirit_reader
ah yes that bastard lin fan
