Good, write more and more you will be a great writer soon. May Allah bless you my dear daughter. But you have to practice and make the stories more eligible to make people feel. Practice makes a man perfect.

Good enough for giving a lessen to fake friends . Characters are designed very good. Just try to write more chapters my dear daughter. I hope you will surely be the best writer in the world

Good luck my dear daughter, its a very educational story to make others conscious about phone, may you be the best writer in the world. You have just started and keep it in mind never give up.

Good luck, try more and more to write and give education to others my dear daughter. But after finishing academic works. And may Allah make you a successful writer