Just finished, this is an amazing novel! Not much more to say, just read it. Cant wait to see what the author does next.

Had a great start! I keep checking back hoping for more chapters only to find cobwebs. Maybe one day, but I think it’s just wishful thinking on my part.

For the author…just read the chapter sum up that listed all of the things left out for space and wanted to throw my two cents in. Your book is great, I love reading it. I’m glad you shortened the dungeon a bit and some ideas, even great ones are going to get lost in editing. That said, to hell with the people who complain! Just complete a book that speaks to your vision and that your happy with and we’ll keep reading and enjoying it. For every jackass that is so bored that they feel the need to write a stupid comment there are 100’s of us that just read, enjoy and quietly move on with our lives like adults. Keep writing, the quietly satisfied will be here waiting for the next chapter.

Love this book! All characters are well developed and the story and powers are well thought out. I like that even the villains aren’ really bad (usually), they just have a different view. Not everything is black and white. Looking forward to more updates!!

Damn! There are so many garbage books on this site, this one is great!! I look forward to all the updates, I hope your not really quitting this book.

One of the best books on this site, great author! He puts amazing depth and details into the story! Can’ wait for each new chapter to come out. Looking forward to seeing this through until the end!!