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I like what's happening with the scolding and the connection Marcus is showing with his family, father and mother. We already had an idea of who Marcus is, but if it had just become a linear story without exploring other emotional aspects, especially with his family, the depth of Marcus as a character, his ambitions, likes, dislikes, preferences, opinions that may or may not influence him, weaknesses, and family, would have made it quite boring in my opinion. Without knowing this, it would become quite boring to me. I believe things like small scenes of comedy, romance, teasing, sarcasm, scolding, dinners, interactions with other characters with various levels of familiarity and emotions add color to a story and its protagonist. In summary, I like this story, this fanfic.