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this book is actually good you just need to work on the inconsistency in the spelling of the book that helps the MC regress, I've read up to chapter 25 and throughout the book has been called 5 different names and it's always changing which kill immersion, also some clan names changes too sometimes and reverts back in another chapter pls try to correct all that
there are too many inconsistency in skill and cultivation naming , I'm always seeing different names'sof the book that helps him regress. first was heaven scripture the another one was cheoma scroll and this chapter called it tancheng scripture why so many names for a simple book 😭😭
hmm the last chapter you named it heavenly scripture now in this chapter I'm seeing cheonam scroll this really confuses the readers's
thanks bro you saved my time and mental health, I've been seeing lot's of sub par novels so far on this platform and some I just turned of my brain to read but I still just abandon them when i get to a point i can't take it anymore
so far so good it's looking okay , a bit fast paced but understandable
bro ain't leaving ops who are gonna come back to hunt him, he cleans house well to have peace of mind
hehe my man has trust issues eeh 😏
ooh okay thanks
man it's been more than 15 chapters without legion showing up and this is making loose interest because I don't care about the other God and their life story. at least 5 chapters would have been enough for it but this is just pushing it
this looks really promising and rarely say this but I think I'm gonna enjoy this 👍