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    null_constellation1yr
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    i meant to not rate the translation quality as i read this on a different site so im not sure whether the translation on that site and this are the same. same thing for stability of updates for the rest tho this story is an 8 - 9/0/5 out of 10 for me. what would bump it up imo is if the author decided to make the characters or character developments more complex like how for example obito from naruto is written to be very deep. but this is an extremely well made novel and most of the things that's happened in it make sense for why they did. infact i dont remember once where i didn't understand why something happened in the story. definitely give this a try if you wanna try something not so typical. it has really great fight scenes, is really sci-fi while also having magic and other types of power systems. has really great show of unique and different abilities. characters dont all act the same. the weakest thing about this novel is the players and im not going to spoil but there's something that they do every once in a while that isn't too relevant to the story and isn't as enjoyable as the rest of the novel. but other than that this is an extremely enjoyable novel its a shame the author had to rush the ending. hopefully in the future he'll come back to flesh it out or add some after story/stories considering he's writing another novel rn so there's a possibility. lets keep hoping my fellow black star followers

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    The Legendary Mechanic
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    null_constellation1yr
    Replied to Kerail

    yeah whatever reason he had for cutting it short im sad about it man. its a shame he couldn't get the ending he was originally going to write out maybe he'll add something later on...hopefully😔but on the bright side he's writing a new novel so he might actually come back to this one day and fix the ending or maybe an after story👀👀

    altalt
    The Legendary Mechanic
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    null_constellation1yr
    Replied to ArchDenis

    funniest thread ive seen on any site in a long ass time😂😂

    altalt
    The Legendary Mechanic
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