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MelBri1dCommentedCh 393 Chapter 100: Such Ruins, Such Reunion_2- MelBri1dCommentedCh 387 Chapter 98: Who Else Is There_2
- MelBri3dCommentedCh 290 The Boundless Sweetness of Desire and Love
- MelBri3dCommentedCh 282 David’s First Fly
- MelBri3dReplied to Mayu_0780
The intestines are stuffed with tofu, maybe?
Su Xiaoxiao made a pot of braised pork, a bowl of tofu intestines, a large bowl of steamed eggs, three small bowls of steamed eggs, and a plate of cabbage. She mixed some radish shreds. - MelBri4dReplied to AzuraNight
He's sleeping in, duh! Obviously!😛😜🤪
Most of the money had been spent on snacks, leaving less than two hundred copper coins. - MelBri11dCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7: The Intimidated Thug, Does Today Count as a Date?
- MelBri12dCommented
Wow!...and then you ruined it...
After finishing his sentence, Zhang Wei's gaze fleetingly swept over Xia Qianyue's somewhat modest chest, thinking it was a pity, no one's perfect... - MelBri12dCommented
Maybe she's allergic to seafood or just clams? As we know from WWII, when the Allied forces fed the starving prisoners, what would seem like a normal amount of food to us would be too much for someone who has been starved for that long, and one could get sick. Foaming at the mouth, however...
Ch 8 Scared of Him - MelBri12dCommented
Consistency is lacking here! First his eyes were violet, then blue, and now a darker grey than usual. Her eyes were hazely- grey, then bright green, then moss green. I mean, eye colors can slightly change due to lighting, from shifting of moods, or from turning into a vampire or a werewolf, but were any of these reasons given? No. You're a good writer, so don't get sloppy, it's distracting...
Ch 8 Scared of Him - MelBri13dReplied to Stanky5187
Ikr?
"Yes, boss, I have acquired the item, hmm, yes, the owner of the villa is right beside me, a nobody. Understood, I will take care of it cleanly..." - MelBri13dReplied to Stanky5187
I'm sure they do!
"It's unbelievable that Lawyer Zhang Qiansheng has defeated the Procuratorate again, clearing Li Fuwen of murder charges. With this victory, could Lawyer Zhang have reached 3000 career wins?" - MelBri13dReplied to Stanky5187
No, the author probably meant a paralegal.
If he hadn't chosen to be a lawyer, but rather a legal worker, earning less money, perhaps his family would have been happy and content, arriving home to his wife's delicious cooking every day, and his daughter would happily call him daddy, enjoying the joys of family life. - MelBri19dCommented
Correction: "...laid inside a coffin for hours..."
"That would not have worked. He was a public figure, and his funeral would have been a public affair. He stopped going outside due to fear. Do you really think he would have lied inside a coffin without fidgeting for hours?" replied Zion. - MelBri19dCommented
Correction, "He, too, was scared of the assassin." or "He was also scared of the assassin." or "He was scared of the assassin, too."
Zion gulped. The fear was visible on his face. He too was scared of the assassin. "No, at first, he was a little scared because someone tried to defy his reign of terror. He was terrified after what happened to his car." - MelBri19dCommented
Correction: Leave out the comma after "audio".
Archer kept staring at him with widened eyes and open mouth. He knew the audio, the FBI was receiving right now would explode everything. There would be chaos in the field office. - MelBri19dCommented
Correction: "...The Don has really died."
"So, after the car toppled, the driver pulled him out somehow. They hid behind the car and waited to hear if another hail of bullets would come their way. But there was silence, dead silence. They had no idea that the killer had already done his job. He had killed my father with the poison. When nothing was heard for minutes, the driver hijacked a car and drove my father home. No one chased after them, no one followed them which was bizarre. The killer was so confident that he didn't even try to check if Don has really died," narrated Zion. - MelBri19dCommented
Correction: "...The Don.." Without the "The" before ("The Don"), it would just be "don", without capitalization. Your program might be autocorrecting, since "don" is also a common name from previous generations.
"Well, he was rattled after that. No one ever tried to do such a thing to him ever in his life. He was the boss, he was the Don yet someone tried to take him out. He was scared to see the marksmanship of the assassin," said Zion. - MelBri19dCommented
Correction: "He wanted to meet with the person to learn from him, but at the same time..."
"Have you noticed any tall buildings near that crossroad? There is no vantage point for an assassin to set up near that place. And the constant traffic, all day long. No one can anticipate which car will cross at what time. I just proved that to you," shouted Archer. He was shocked to his core. If such an assassin was really alive, he must be an expert and someone to be feared. He never wanted to meet with the person to learn from him but at the same time, his soul was shivering with fear.