keep away.

as CHP.2 author goes all Slytherin are dark. hopefully it's not a another griffindork idiocy with licking the Bush haired sl.t and pottey

An idiot of the best quality mixed with and arrogant system. So many limiters on creating skills that a an steel rod seems more flexible. Childish at best..

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

A disaster of a novel where the MC has been enslaved to a stupid sect master at chapter 94 by being an idiot of the highest order. My worst purchase. I suggest to keep away from this sadistic author-san.

You don't need the disaster called the show. The Witcher game series is the source it seems. At least with the game Yen is a beautiful lady and not a sissy.

The worst part of this novel is the lack of back bone of the MC he is a simple wuss. a bi*ch tries to kill him he doesn't respond simply walks a way like the little sh.t he is. his -family- was treating him like doormat with faults yet he is still submissive to them answers like a well trained dog. ppl were bullying him yet after 20 chapters there is not even one respond that includes a backbone or a shrivel of a character. MC is nothing but a well trained sissy and this is killing the novel for me.

MC is chunni and and idiotic edgelord. All his actions up to chapter 100 is moronic at best and engineered inefficiency at worst. Author has needlessly complicated the fiction to the point that it is not even fun to read to kill time. Way too much detail, plot twists characters whom will be forgotten after 10 chapters yet author has spend 5 chapters for these needless details. It is more of a homework when compare to something you read to enjoy. Not my cup of tea for sure. Good luck to the author.

no offence author but this fiction is really bad. your MC is extremely naive acting like Santa giving gifts left and right. your obsession with granger and potter is disgusting and pedophilic. MC's stupidity is on a whole other level. anyways good luck.

Why are you feeding each and every power MC gets to his harem? Your MC has serious mental issues. His intelligence does not exist. Telling nearly all his secrets to the first bangable female he saw, giving away powerups for free.. Your MC is pure beta. Good luck with your happy to share my powers mc.

What does it matter to you how old i am mate. go read some goody two shoes stories for kindergarten age group.

Thank you for the chapter my good man

a full chapter of IFs and nothing more. It is tiresome to read such chapters author-san.

I'm extremely happy to hear that you got over the bushy haired nightmare. As for the other issue what do you call a mature person in a child's body or not simping over an 11 years old?

You are good author. Keep up the good work.

why the earrings... he is a MALE not a sissy.

Amazing read, great writing quality, perv and pedo MC who can not stop simping after granger, who is 11 yrs old with character of a banshee. Author says he will change his mind about the relationship, hopefully he'll get rid of his MC's SIMP nature as well. I'll check it after some months.

same difference mate :)

Hopefully author will leave the idiotic trio behind as soon as possible. I really do not like heroic type MC's till now mc was doing great being self centered and getting stronger. only 2-3 chapters with bold monkey and he is in trouble. Whatever the reason for traveling with them to be honest its not worth.

nice and smart MC not an edge lord, not a yes man and definitely not a spineless idiot. perfectly balanced [img=exp]