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Anyway this is gonna be spoilers and its bit off from me having not read this in a year or two vahn isn't a very growing character now don't get me wrong he does change in simpler ways and when it comes to how he handles certain issues and problems but that said he seemingly never grows to be as strong as he seems to need to be instead of just developing over time it's like he hits plateaus and doesn't overcome then for a hundred chapters at a time after he's gotten past a certain lvl and it becomes repetitive train fight upkeep harem make things find someone plotting or being evil he starts trouble and then refocusing on training then doing it all over again in a different order I know it's just life but he should be able to just try not to get into trouble after he's established himself and grow until he doesn't have to worry about that anymore also sex scenes with the the harem at like 20 people is ridiculously just not needed it doesn't ever focus on anyone and never has any tension or spice or build up for it to actually be kinda fun to read but ya know it was kinda enjoyable for while so maybe I actually liked it to a point but it just got boring when I can see ein is good at writing so why does it have to be so infuriating slow growth but rushed in the context of the story
you can but it's not that good to put them against each other
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it's not bad it might be because English isn't your first language or perhaps you not being a more experienced writer but your explaining as the characters and normal people don't and it's usually concise if it is and the characters at some points don't feel like they have a personality and I feel like you can really tell when it comes to Emmet but it might be because I've seen him written as well if not better than how his movie counter part played him sides all that it's not bad
unless he was able to make something with the nanites to disperse the heat and from what I recall he hasn't because it's sorta redundant from the regeneration
my boy Mr west has a book in this
a certain 'west' swears by them also guess I have to give them a go