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  • edswii
    edswii2yr
    Posted

    It's Fantastic... I don't have nothing really else to say besides that... I hope you all have a good day and give this story a try... Soooo I think this is about 140 enough so I can post this review.

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    Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
    Anime & Comics · Prognastat
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  • edswii
    edswii2yr
    Commented

    I'm reading some of the comments and lot of people are angry that there's not an immediate jump in power, if I remember right then his enemy is a triangle mage, since they don't count void that means the strongest people in this world would be a square mage, that's like complaining that after killing gangsters he should be able to defeat the world's second strongest that are trained for combat no problem.😅

    Ch 74 Betrade
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    Unbound Familiar
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • edswii
    edswii2yr
    Commented

    First, and not a bad start so far.

    Ch 1 Chapter 2 - Bag. (Edit)
    altalt
    The Ronin of Avatar (Indefinite Hiatus)
    TV · PageNotFound
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  • edswii
    edswii2yr
    Commented

    You had me in the beginning of the story, then you lost me when you got the kid about clan supremacy as the only one with half a mind despite being younger mentally as well as in experience in the world that's all about subterfuge

    Ch 9 Minato and the reaper
    altalt
    In Naruto With Gamer System
    Anime & Comics · Bakorio
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  • edswii
    edswii2yr
    Posted

    This is one of the better fanfics you will find anywhere, the only problem is it takes him awhile to get a chapter out. But definitely worth checking out.

    altalt
    Roommates in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · NoobMastar69
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