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It's Fantastic... I don't have nothing really else to say besides that... I hope you all have a good day and give this story a try... Soooo I think this is about 140 enough so I can post this review.

I'm reading some of the comments and lot of people are angry that there's not an immediate jump in power, if I remember right then his enemy is a triangle mage, since they don't count void that means the strongest people in this world would be a square mage, that's like complaining that after killing gangsters he should be able to defeat the world's second strongest that are trained for combat no problem.😅

First, and not a bad start so far.

You had me in the beginning of the story, then you lost me when you got the kid about clan supremacy as the only one with half a mind despite being younger mentally as well as in experience in the world that's all about subterfuge

This is one of the better fanfics you will find anywhere, the only problem is it takes him awhile to get a chapter out. But definitely worth checking out.