robert_stallone

Konoha: Creating Infinite Bloodline from Daily Settlement 木叶：从每日结算起创造无限血继 Author: 大家发大财 https://www.wuxiabox.com/novel/konoha-creating-infinite-bloodline-from-daily-settlement.html

first I thought it was Megan fox but after reading your comment I have changed my mind looks very familiar but I can't tell which one

OMG 🤯 🤯 🤯 🤯 🤯 🤯 🤯 he is back😭 i waited so long for a new chapter😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

most people prefer inches not cm

inch not cm

bro why do you have to make me do a maths question in the middle of a chapter 🤔🤔🤔🧮🧮🧮🧮🧮🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🧮🧮🧮🧮🧮🧮🧮🧮

bro what happened where did your ff go why did you remove it i was waiting the whole day for it.

I didn't read your review, but I don't think there's anything wrong with infodumping. People prefer more information to understand what the story is about. Maybe you didn't like the way the information was presented, but I think the author is improving really fast. With every chapter, he gets better at writing. You should explain how he can improve his writing in the comments; it might be helpful for him. Give him time, and at the speed he's improving, no one will have any issues with his writing in a few months.

noooooooooooooooo the cliffhanger

just a suggestion you can totally ignore it if you feel that it is stupid. I was thinking why don't you just give him a skill related to training his abilities and martial arts. it could be anything like a time chamber from dragon ball. or it could be like the skill in the novel SSS-Class Sui**de Hunter. I don't remember the name of the ability because I read the novel way to long ago for me to remember it, but it was something related to going back 24 hours when the main character dies. or you can give him an ability like in the novel called pocket hunting dimension. the MC has the ability to go into another dimension when he goes to sleep. the time outside that dimension does not move when he is in there. he also can not come out of that dimension until he does not die in that space, and after 24 hours he can go back to the same dimension. what I am trying to say is give him an ability that let's him practice with the fighting styles and abilities he has already gained. he does not have to gain any powers from that new training ability. it could be just an ability that helps him with his training of his abilities, fighting style, new fighting styles he would learn or gain, help him with creating new martial arts. the best part is you can use the training chapters like a filler chapter an ability that helps him train not make him instantly overpowered. again this is just a suggestion. you might already have a better plan then what I suggested. and thank God you did not let the MC use that book. I really hate the protagonist in panty note manhwa .