( Written with the translator ) I believe that Jin Woo’s strength at the end of the novel only became limited because he decided to abandon the System and live a 'normal' life. In my view, it would have an unlimited (but very long) growth with the help of the System, which at no time showed a real limit. Not to mention himself and his shadows, which could easily get stronger and stronger. Generally speaking, the Jin Woo of the novel ending is not a true power in the DC world, but it could very well become one if it had not made the decision to abandon the System. At least that’s my point of view.

Think on the good side, it's only a hiatus and not the story stopping forever. I will come back to post more chapters someday, but until then I'll be focusing on another one I'm about to make (because I can't stand not writing anything). Maybe the new story will even have a few Undertale aspects in it, who knows.

( Written with the help of the Translator ) | ( There are obvious errors in the Message, this was written at dawn and I’m definitely not energetic enough to correct each error ) Overall, in the few chapters that history has shown so far, the work has an extremely promising future. The other reviews of people complaining about the Protagonist being a servant and nonsense of this kind, are unfortunately made by readers who do not know how to enjoy a good story. And for those of you who are concerned about the main character being a servant, relax. The Protagonist has so far proved intelligent with certain actions and the author maintains the level of servitude in an acceptable margin, nothing exaggerated so far. So it is not necessary to worry about getting the wrong idea of silly comments like 'The protagonist counts too much for his master'' or 'He knelt to his master, that is annoying'. They’re just kids who don’t know how to make the most of a story. Keep up the good work!

( Written with the help of the translator ) I like that one. He is following an interesting pace and he is only saying what is necessary to facilitate his new life in this world, instead of telling her that her existence was decided by a Human with a pencil and paper. Overall, continue with the good work author! If you want a hint from me, try to ignore the complaints of the Protagonist getting too low (kneeling and serving) or saying certain information. It takes a decent interaction for a story to develop. Soon, it is perfectly fine everything you have done so far, just avoid exaggerating too much in the actions more 'servants', because it can end up crossing the line sometimes.

I don't think it's considered a harem.

Same Here*

Right here. In the work of the Spear Hero (made especially for him), this spear can even make him Immortal and go back in time :/

I’m being completely honest. I was looking for some good fanfiction that involves the Omnitrix and finally found one, thank you so much for doing this work. So far she has shown herself amazing, I hope to see more chapters in the future.

''( If the message is confusing, I’m sorry. ) Both have extreme weaknesses that can be exploited. Undyne cannot remain in that mode for long, and if she is killed before she can become determined enough, she does not even enter that mode. Sans, as long as you don’t touch his brother, he won’t act as harshly as in the genocide route. He’s someone extremely lazy. Doesn’t mean you're gonna get away with killing some monster. Overall, as long as you don’t try to kill anyone, Undertale can be solved solely with conversation (including Chara, Asriel and Frisk).''

Something like that. I’m not sure yet because the pair for the Protagonist is not yet set in my mind. But the character who is winning agaist all the others easily so far is Chara. By chapter 15 I must have decided the pair.

Instead of these things, they’re bones.

:)

It would be better if he had a domain, there are several ways to break this technique if he has to take people to a 'different dimension' or something like that.

Something like that.

( Written message with the use of Translator ) 'Ying' and 'Yang' is basically the beginning of everything. It would be interesting for Bankai to have a 'limited area' where it could both control projectile attacks from opponents (example: if they use long distance jutsus on it), and also allow it to manipulate the terrain at will. A small example: He could modify the property of the earth within this 'limited area', causing it to cause some additional effects to the opponent such as the inability to use beam jutsus (ray chakra would be absorbed by the earth within this limited area). And obviously this would not only be limited to land, it could also be used in the air and in all other materials within that 'limited area'. I don’t know if it’s really a good idea, but I can see thousands of uses for a bankai like that. (not to mention that this would be insanely strong in Bleach’s own universe)

Soon you will find, probably in the next chapter.

( Written on the translator, I’m almost sure it got a little confused ) The death of both would serve to break the cliché of how Aruto fanfics work. Most fanfics either save Japan and Japan, or they leave them alive and change almost nothing in history. With the death of Minato and Kushina the story would go to a more 'original' rhythm since this would not only serve to make the MC stronger, but also to mature. It is recommended that if you go to kill them, make it a situation where the MC can face reality and understand - even more, if he already understands a little - that the ninja world is not just about getting stronger and the rest is a sea of flowers. I believe that the death of both (who are friends of the MC) should add a lot to the growth and maturation of the CM. This could also somehow serve as a trigger for the MC to get even stronger, or even awaken something in their death. ( If I’m not mistaken all the powers that the CM began, always added something when its original carriers were lost in anger or despair. Zanpakutou: Reiatsu and stronger techniques. Accelerator: That state Berseker. And things like )

I will follow suggestions from readers as long as they are acceptable suggestions.

He will not participate in the 'X-Event', at least not the first part. But he will participate in some different events, among them the 'Sans Villain Squad'(is a series that is being launched and very interesting, I highly recommend you research about it).

I remember seeing Axetale on some random website. The only comic I had ever seen showed the incredible quality of this AU, which unlike the others, is mainly made to develop the story and everything else. Most of these AU’s created are to make 'The Strong Sans', Undertale’s Fandom is disappointing, but it’s always inspiring to find AU’s like Axetale, Dusttale, Flowerfell and others of that kind.