Ace_the_wolf

Not a bad start for the start of your series; there are some grammatical issues, some iffy parts for telling/showing the story.

Have*

Thank you for the chapters!

Kinda confusing with this, should it be "Ding! You have learned the skill fire armor!" Or " Ding! You habe learned the spell fire armor!"

This was a lot better than I ever expected, the only negative thing I would say about this novel, is the grammar and spelling mistakes. Great job on making such an interesting novel author!

meixiu*

i love how long yijun acts he's so hilarious

You just can't get enough of it...

I love this novel, mlb does such a good job on the development of the story. The mc is very naive and innocent, but there is character development, such as the chapter 480's he starts learning other 'things' I absolutely love the interactions between the characters it's absolutely hilarious.

I enjoyed reading this a lot, love reading where the mc gets op quick. Althought the mc became op really quickly. Author keep up the great work, and I hope you will keep on updating.