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he most likely just copied the chapters put it through gpt
writing quality: he uses ai to expand the text, tho he did cut out the flowery words somewhat. I have read up to 85 chapters so far. ( if anyone knows a good novel please tell me) Story development: 'mah' so-so i would like to say, sometimes the chapter end somewhere and after 2 chapters of filler after that we know what happens next like wtf make stuff constant and it makes no sense if chapter ends somewhere and you decide to change something in the next chapter and then add the ending of the chapter 2 ch before that character design: he tried to give them depth but it was ruined by the use of ai, ai when told to expand the text it would remove some details. Update stability: idk didn't reach that far. Word building: mc knows everything about the story plot and i mean every fking detail, i would bet he would know what underwear the female cast wore on a specific event. This is all that I have noticed. i don't really plan on reading ahead after ch 85 so if anyone has a good novel that you can suggest i would appreciate that quite a lot.
fully written by ai (gpt) if you see flowery words as one of the people gave an example of in one of the reviews. then it means it was written by ai. be aware of what u read. some only take help in editing from ai but this story is 3 lines from the author which are then converted to 4 paragraphs that only contain those three lines of actual content followed by filler flowery 🌺🌹 words.
for those who are wondering, the flowery words are just chatgpt writing, if you tell chatgpt to expand or add details to the 5 or 6 lines you wrote yourself you'll get 3 or 4 long paragraphs of flowery words. at this point I am trying to find a novel that has minimum ai use. if anyone knows a good novel with no and i quote " flowery words" please tell me. i would be internally grateful for your generosity 🙏
no not till now, but idk about the future
so i read it all, and my overall evaluation is not bad, it is nice to be honest, it is well balanced and doesn't really just make girls fall for him, there is reason behind emotions, thank God for that and the author thank him too i guess, anyhow word building is also quite good. the power system is alright i would say. over all as i mentioned before "not bad"
i haven't started reading yet, I was like I have seen the word sefirah castle somewhere just can't remember where?? you know the feeling of something on the top of your tongue and not remembering what it was, as I was thinking this i scrolled down, see all the anime name and all the and at the end I see LOTM, "ah they are also adding lotm" I said pressed back, and started scrolling again, "wait a min"i paused for a second or two, I go back "did i read it right???" i questioned myself, and read the title of the fanfiction, "what the actual fu**??" had my brain lagging for a second when I read it right. now then I am done telling, I will read it now. happy Reading everyone.
Thanks I'll check them out, i have read about 38 chaps so far, i noticed that the dialogue is way too short, you are just telling the readers, what the characters are doing inside of showing, ur paragraph: (I even have my hands covered in mana now. But just then, before the dagger could get in contact with me... "[Bang]" I heard a voice behind me. And the next thing I knew... Thud- The goblin that was about to stab my eye was on the ground, dead.) i picked this up randomly while reading. explain more, as I said ur telling the readers not showing, you can improve on that, tho i hope it improves later on, and plz reduce the use of sounds, like tap tap etc, ur using them way too much untill now, other then that I have seen few mistakes in ur spelling but it's once in 12 or 13 chaps, Overall it's a great story so far. anyhow best of luck mate I look forward to reading ur novels in the future as well.