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BlackRaven_

BlackRaven_

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hay i am BlackRaven_ Read my novel "Rebirth: A Cat with a System"

2021-04-15 JoinedIndia
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  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_15 hours ago
    Replied to Captain_Spoiler

    thankyou

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_2 days ago
    Replied to SwatD

    understood

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_2 days ago
    Replied to SwatD

    he most likely just copied the chapters put it through gpt

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_3 days ago
    Posted

    writing quality: he uses ai to expand the text, tho he did cut out the flowery words somewhat. I have read up to 85 chapters so far. ( if anyone knows a good novel please tell me) Story development: 'mah' so-so i would like to say, sometimes the chapter end somewhere and after 2 chapters of filler after that we know what happens next like wtf make stuff constant and it makes no sense if chapter ends somewhere and you decide to change something in the next chapter and then add the ending of the chapter 2 ch before that character design: he tried to give them depth but it was ruined by the use of ai, ai when told to expand the text it would remove some details. Update stability: idk didn't reach that far. Word building: mc knows everything about the story plot and i mean every fking detail, i would bet he would know what underwear the female cast wore on a specific event. This is all that I have noticed. i don't really plan on reading ahead after ch 85 so if anyone has a good novel that you can suggest i would appreciate that quite a lot.

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_4 days ago
    Posted

    fully written by ai (gpt) if you see flowery words as one of the people gave an example of in one of the reviews. then it means it was written by ai. be aware of what u read. some only take help in editing from ai but this story is 3 lines from the author which are then converted to 4 paragraphs that only contain those three lines of actual content followed by filler flowery 🌺🌹 words.

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_4 days ago
    Replied to GeneralDeFartos_L

    for those who are wondering, the flowery words are just chatgpt writing, if you tell chatgpt to expand or add details to the 5 or 6 lines you wrote yourself you'll get 3 or 4 long paragraphs of flowery words. at this point I am trying to find a novel that has minimum ai use. if anyone knows a good novel with no and i quote " flowery words" please tell me. i would be internally grateful for your generosity 🙏

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_9 days ago
    Replied to Noir_Nier

    no not till now, but idk about the future

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_10 days ago
    Replied to BlackRaven_

    so i read it all, and my overall evaluation is not bad, it is nice to be honest, it is well balanced and doesn't really just make girls fall for him, there is reason behind emotions, thank God for that and the author thank him too i guess, anyhow word building is also quite good. the power system is alright i would say. over all as i mentioned before "not bad"

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_10 days ago
    Posted

    i haven't started reading yet, I was like I have seen the word sefirah castle somewhere just can't remember where?? you know the feeling of something on the top of your tongue and not remembering what it was, as I was thinking this i scrolled down, see all the anime name and all the and at the end I see LOTM, "ah they are also adding lotm" I said pressed back, and started scrolling again, "wait a min"i paused for a second or two, I go back "did i read it right???" i questioned myself, and read the title of the fanfiction, "what the actual fu**??" had my brain lagging for a second when I read it right. now then I am done telling, I will read it now. happy Reading everyone.

  • BlackRaven_
    BlackRaven_18 days ago
    Replied to Drei05

    Thanks I'll check them out, i have read about 38 chaps so far, i noticed that the dialogue is way too short, you are just telling the readers, what the characters are doing inside of showing, ur paragraph: (I even have my hands covered in mana now. But just then, before the dagger could get in contact with me... "[Bang]" I heard a voice behind me. And the next thing I knew... Thud- The goblin that was about to stab my eye was on the ground, dead.) i picked this up randomly while reading. explain more, as I said ur telling the readers not showing, you can improve on that, tho i hope it improves later on, and plz reduce the use of sounds, like tap tap etc, ur using them way too much untill now, other then that I have seen few mistakes in ur spelling but it's once in 12 or 13 chaps, Overall it's a great story so far. anyhow best of luck mate I look forward to reading ur novels in the future as well.

Abyss Holder

In the desolate urban sprawl, there existed a boy named Steven – a name as commonplace as the concrete beneath his worn-out shoes. His figure, terribly slender, bore the weight of days without sustenance, a stark reflection of the harsh life within the shadows of the towering skyscrapers. His disheveled appearance spoke of deprivation; his clothing, little more than rags haphazardly sewn together, clung to his meager frame. Steven's features, though obscured by grime, revealed a haunting contrast. His black hair, adorned with a few rebellious red strands, framed a face marked by hardship. His pupils, black with a faint but discernible red tint, mirrored the desolation etched into his soul. Staring into the familiar darkness that enveloped his existence, Steven couldn't help but voice the silent question that echoed in his mind, "When is this going to end?" The abyss, seemingly attuned to his despair, responded with a transformative touch. The surroundings, once stagnant and oppressive, began to shift and change before him, trapping him in a perpetual cycle of witnessing his own tragic past unfold. Transported back to the age of six, Steven found himself amidst the warmth of familial joy, his parents' and his own expressions radiating happiness. Yet, even in the midst of this fleeting respite, the relentless cycle persisted, as if destiny reveled in replaying the moments that fueled the flames of his recurrent nightmares. Fighting against the inexorable pull of his haunting memories, Steven, like a slum-bound ghost, yearned for an end to the perpetual loop. The city's towers cast long shadows over his struggle, and the contrast between the opulence above and his desolation below fueled his determination for a better life. In the midst of this dire reality, Steven's path took an unexpected turn when he made the resolute decision to enlist in the military. The armed forces, a gateway to opportunity and escape from the slum's oppressive grasp, promised a chance to break free from the shackles of his impoverished past. Little did Steven know that his journey would extend far beyond the familiar streets of the slums. The military, equipped with advanced technology and knowledge of other dimensions, opened doors to realms previously unimaginable. As he explored new universes and studied the cosmic mysteries, Steven's quest for a better life evolved into a cosmic odyssey, challenging not only the limits of his physical existence but also the boundaries of reality itself. Throughout this transformative journey, Steven, emotionally reserved and scarred by the echoes of his past, found solace in the bonds forged amidst the trials of the military. Trust and love became the cornerstones of his emotional awakening, as he learned to unveil the layers of vulnerability hidden beneath his stoic exterior. As Steven navigates the interwoven tapestry of action, tragedy, romance, sci-fi, adventure, and dimensions, the narrative expands to reflect the complexity of his existence. The story, no longer confined to the limitations of the slums, becomes a symphony of emotions, echoing the resilient spirit of a young man determined to transcend the shadows of his past and embrace the limitless possibilities that unfold across the cosmic expanse.

BlackRaven_ · Fantasy
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162 Chs