The story line is great . I really like the Harry Potter books . Please keep writing many people are interested in the Harry Potter books and storylines .

excellent story . I can't wait to read more .

great story l can't wait to read more

excellent story. I will be reading it to the end.

excellent story .

Jorick arrived just in time to save Katlina. That is cool. I love this story .

Ooh! Katina is so stuck in a cage. Will Jorick be able to save her life? This is a good story. Keep up the good work .

Ameila is royalty wow I didn't see that coming. Great story love it.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I am like the story line .I have trouble putting it down to do house work .

This is a good story .I hope that I can read the whole thing .

Great book interesting and fun. I can't put the storyline down. It makes me want read all day till I finish the book .

The story is beautiful and intriguing keep up the writing you are an excellent story teller .

Penny is doing well under the circumstances .

Amazing story .

Excellent story . I am loving it .