yes, finally someone understands the value of Haki. Shanks is strong just with Haki. Even with current luffy(Awakened DF+Haki), Many are not sure if he can win Against shanks. Shanks only have Haki, that's it. But since he only has it, I bet it is OP. Haki is the best power to posses in One piece world, even Devils fruits are pathetic in front of it.

I like the fact that she is psychopath , not some goody two shoes.

It's not lifespan* it's just that most people die at average age of 30 due to work .

Actually , I won't be surprised if Hiruzen is like that . He puts on this kind Grandfatherly face while he does everyone dirty like Senju clan , Uzumaki clan and uchiha which he supposed to protect but let them die anyway because he is 'soft' . In actuality he doesn't care because he is at end of his life (Most people in ninja world only live upto 30 years) . He is an extremist in protecting the village but in a different way . He brainwashed Naruto into becoming Hokage and made sure that he'll give his life for th village with the power Naruto holds(Uzumaki lineage, Nine tails , Minato's talent ) .

Ah! It's amazing to see despair in someone as bright as Naruto! Particularly in this situation where he broke.

Hey , you hate MC right? why are you making him so miserable

So , MC's parents are some Godly beings from heaven? Only they can do something like this. In a novel I read , MC was a slave , his parents 'died' but before they died his father gave him a secret skill book . After few 1000 chapters , Lo and behold MC's parents are in higher realm . MC's mom is a Reincarnation goddess , MC's dad is the Main god of the world where MC have lived .

cultivation? Anime doesn't do anything cultivation related stuff. The cultures are vastly different .

he doesn't want to be noticed by anyone but he planned to give pill formula's to alchemist association

Why?

Finally!!! Someone noticed it ! Konoha is as bad as rest of the Village no, even worse . I always hate how others write like Konoha is the good village while the rest are villainous.

your system is too complicated , its not problem for us but in the long run it will be trouble for you . Try to simplify the statistics shown by the system , it will be much easier for you.

The scene reminded me of a certain anime .

mysterious Godly parents living their children in human orphanages is common .

I like the MC, he is reasonable and uses his power correctly.

I was thinking the same thing when I read how Nie lie recited that Infinity has no begining and end which made him level up in the arc where they participated to join sects from Draconic runes realm.

Please don't forgive her and give her an awful death.

You are writing this story in very high difficulty mode , all the best .

I don't understand how can mortal MC's who have no power can curse at Gods when they are literally getting free powers like candies without doing anything from them.