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artoria2yrCommentedI'm kinda annoyed that old gong is behaving this way. he had the same stance as old yan before he heard the explanation from tianhao.
Old Master Gong's face darkened as he said coldly, "A joke? I want to see who dares to laugh at the Gong Family. Since my grandson likes Xiao Lingyu, then we will naturally treat the child in Xiao Lingyu's belly as the Gong Family's descendant." At this point, Old Master Gong glanced at him and said indifferently, "Yan Zheng, don't bring up this again in the future. I don't like to hear it."- artoria2yrPosted
I unfortunately unlocked the entire book (or already what was released already) after reading the first few chapters that were free thinking that the momentum would continue. The relationship dynamics are great but it's terribly slow to develop after getting her initial revenge. After the first 30 or so chapter I could have (or wished I had) skipped the following 150+ chapters. I may be in the minority but I actually dislike the mc. She repeatedly responds to people that hard work is necessary in order to succeed (when prompted why she left her desk job for farming) but girl literally just has to think to have the gardening done. I'm kinda sick of all the OP leads. Sure she meets some set backs here and there but she comes out unscathed. It's also terribly annoying how the stars all align for her to meet all the right people as well. Other than the ml, she hits it off with all the other crucial characters. I feel like I wasted 2000 coins unlocking this book. overall story is promising but it could benefit from a serious revision. Too many filler chapters.
- artoria2yrCommented
isn't she only in her 40's
'Even though Auntie Xiao hasn't taken systematic education, with her talents and lessons from third uncle, third uncle will be able to retire early. Then again, Auntie is at retirement age herself.' - artoria2yrReplied to CReVia
when lingyu requested the surveillance video from the hotel under the guise of the room owner's companion
Gong Tianhao was instantly reminded of that fiery night. However, he also remembered how he was used by the same woman. He said faintly, "No." - artoria2yrCommented
anyone else feel like these characters lack creativity when assigning names?
"Luo, Ao Kuai, this is Nan. He'll be following you to protect you from now." - artoria2yrCommented
contradicts with an earlier passage where dr liu states they can life outside the human body and can be bred easily.
Traveling Doctor Liu sighed. He looked at the parasites and laughed faintly. "While it's easy to keep these parasites, it's not easy to breed them. They can only be bred within a human's body and most importantly, they will need to be feed with special herbs, which meant that you have to eat specific food. - artoria2yrCommented
And here I wrongly assumed I would get to witness a bit of this internal strife. Being told his first marriage/divorce shredded his belief in love but then (from a reader's pov) immediately falling for FL I call BS on that. I hope some of the later chapters would show the ruthless "Ice King." Until then I guess I'll just take back this bottle of vinegar with me and yearn for its taste.
Because it was not just his heart breaking at that time. All of his beliefs were shattering right before his eyes. That innocent first love of his was gone and along with it, the young him also died down. It was only then he learned that love was the name of pain. It was painful, deceitful, and immoral. So, the fantasy of love that his mother built for him was buried along with his youth. - artoria2yrCommented
I may be the odd one out but I find Raelle and Xian's relationship and interactions very dull. I find myself skimming through the chapters where it's just them. Personally, I find their relationship is too one dimensional compared to how complex all the other relationships are. Xian is just to willing to accept Raelle's challenges of his beliefs. In my opinion, they fell for one another too quickly.
Ch 302 What A Shame - artoria2yrCommented
But Ru eats alone all the time :( yes, your other novel brought me here. I wanted, no, needed, more Ru in my life
She was going to order the food but decided against it. She hated eating all alone. In all these years, she perceived one thing; eating without any company makes you feel the loneliest person alive. Instead of you eating the food, it gives the impression that loneliness is eating you whole. - artoria2yrReplied to hopze21Ch 328 A new knight
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I must be missing something, or rather something is yet to be revealed. Didn't Killian say for her to be a better mother the next time she started over? hmmmmmm
Was there anyone who knew about this clan and sacrificed his life for me? One more thing Isabella was responsible for everything. I had to make sure that she died the same gruesome death. I felt the burn yet my body felt colder than before. - artoria2yrCommented
sad, I caught up again. Waiting for the next content dump. Thank you for the development. I wonder if Killian, having a part in the "rebirth," would have any recollection later on as well. If so, would we get to see through his first set of eyes as to why he would give her that second chance? How could he selflessly love a vile woman who doesn't nothing but plot his demise? the plot thickens.
Ch 275 Passing warmth - artoria2yrCommented
for an eloquently speaking man, this sounds off. then again it would be too corny to say "Marianne, I am going to warm you through your desires." lol. there is no winning. Maybe the best bet would be, "Marianne, trust me in knowing when to stop."
"Marianne, I am going to kiss you and touch you, I promise I will stop if your temperature turns normal again" I said with a pleading voice and she nodded again after some hesitation. - artoria2yrCommented
kill the one responsible seems more appropriate since he knows who it was, whoever makes it seem as though he does not.
Her words were sounding with so much difficulty that my heart clenched. I wanted to kill whoever had done that to her. But before that I had to take care of her. - artoria2yrCommented
this is very confusingly put together.
"That which started chuckling when you lost consciousness. I checked your pulse and it was dying and for a minute I felt that your heart beat had stopped. So I brought you out of the ether away from that witch. - artoria2yrCommented
but you clearly heard Killian speak over your dead body. Maybe Cassius is right, you are dumb 🤭
Was there anyone who knew about this clan and sacrificed his life for me? One more thing Isabella was responsible for everything. I had to make sure that she died the same gruesome death. I felt the burn yet my body felt colder than before. - artoria2yrCommented
again with the "dumb." Stubborn or even selfish world have worked better. A person who is falling in love with another wouldn't casually call them dumb (unless it's endearing in some manner) especially when the recipient is hot headed.
"Why the hell did you do that, Marianne? Why did you go to that witch? You know your heartbeat had stopped and your body had turned cold. You have almost died..!! You are a dumb woman always doing your will and never listening to others…" he kept on complaining and shouting but not a single word registered to my mind. - artoria2yrCommented
this was copied over without changes. should be "I was not at the plaza" out something of that nature.
I stood up with a start. My breaths were shallow and fast. My whole body was covered with sweat. My eyes were still hazy. I rubbed them and blinked a few times to get my vision clear. I looked around and I was not in the dark hut anymore. I was back in the palace but something was not right