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I believe itās beautiful that she is capable of loving both her biological and āadoptedā son equally. Itā s true that not everyone would be able to love that way, but I am glad of a novel portraying this concept of love and the possibility of loving a child regardless of his biological connection to a mother. My heart swells with awe reading these last few chapters š
No, third option was turning her and she will keep the child, but will surely die birthing it, because her vampire body will try to destroy the half human child during pregnancy, thus making her weak and taking her life.
Itā so well written und good paced that I donāt even think about commenting- maybe others feel that way, too? ;)
She is absolutely right - a woman (any person) needs to be able to protect herself somewhat. Iām happy and relieved that she didnāt budge on the training, because as she said earlier on sheāll need it, even if it were just in case if someone challenged her for her mate. You go girl! No golden cage for Elia!
Yes please, I agree! I love the story, thatās why I kept reading, but there are many wrong words in there, like āhusbandā when it should be āhas beenā. Pronounciation-wise itās similar, are you using a voice-to-text? š As english isnt my native language it becomes hard to follow the storyline, always guessing whatās actually supposed to say. Please proof-read before uploading, because it really is an amazing story and I really like your creative mind! āŗļø
I absolutely loved these past few chapters! Your hard work payed off, you had me hooked with my heart racing and forgetting the world around me. Your descriptions of scenery and characters are amazing - I felt drawn into the story, so much that I was basically with Lil reading under the tree, jumping through the trees and falling in love. Amazing work, author! š
I would say itās more than just a difference in backgrounds. Adeline is growing up to be an independent woman, and she is very clear about her needs. In contrast to that, Xavier puts his need of wanting her all to himself first without respecting her wish. He even uses their different backgrounds (here: not knowing about mates and the supernaturals) as an apology to his possesiv and dismissing behaviour, clearly stating that he believes her mindset would change after the courting phase/when she learns about the mate bond. Iām just glad that he is willing to learn and I hope in the future heāll truly understand.
Just get her O + insteadā¦ will work fine. But seriously, there hasnāt been a mass accident nor are they in the middle of nowhere. Highly unlikely storyline here!
Dear Queen, Iām glad that you decided to keep going with this story! Itās wonderfully drafted and detailed, and I love the strong female lead and also her female werewolf counterpart. š¤© As you explained, you already learned a few lessons along the way. Even though itās true that you didnāt start writing for the money but to imagine other worlds, I can totally understand your wish to earn money. I hope you learned to always read contracts carefully before signing them and to ask any questions you might have. As I understood, you are a young woman and earning money can surely benefit you with regard to further studies or education. With time you will find the belance between enjoying your art and still making a solid income. Donāt sell yourself cheap and never feel guilty or wrong for your goal to also make money with your art! Be proud of that creative mind of yours š¤
She was ānotā a fan of solid foods (correction)
Yes, I really like your story so far! It captured my attention right from the beginning. Iām already curious to when the different story lines of the grandma/granddaughter duo and our main characters will collide. :D I love your writing style! Keep it going!