I read a couple of chapters, the idea is good. The story has very little background and important details (almost no details) so it is annoying to read and that is why the chapters are somewhat short. It is a story in which you have to ignore many gaps to continue reading.

Just because you are strong you won't be promoted to chunnin (keep in mind that they are like mini squad leaders), and if that were the case I would have had to promote Neji in the original work (the greatest genius of the hyugas). . But apart from being strong, many points are taken into account, such as the ninja mentality, which is essential.

Could it be that Fujin demonstrates in this Arc that he was able to learn the flying thunder god jutsu during the invasion? Or will you keep it as a hole card? Likewise, it will be a very good event to gain influence in a power base.

The truth is that I read until chapter 58, the story doesn't bother me that it's slow, but I'm surprised that until this chapter they still haven't solved so many gaps or gaps in the previous chapters. I missed a lot more background and details in the first chapters, for example his early graduation or his relationship with secondary characters. I ignored some things to continue reading but I realized that this is a fic with nice words "to pass the time"

The work is good, it was well developed and was reaching very good condition. But from chapter 48 something changes that was super unnecessary, this error made me want to stop reading it. The story had a lot of potential, and since the author did not correct that error, this must be a translation and not an original.

The truth is that the first chapter is not the best. but I continued reading the following chapters and they are quite good, so far the story and the protagonist have a good development. Taking out the first chapter, this fic is recommended.

There were 5 wishes. -Lineage -Devil Fruit -Immunity to water (that is completely separate and unnecessary, you already have your lineage, you can use the excuse that with this you have greater resistance and tolerance towards water but you also have no immunity) -The three hakis - Know how to handle the sword. The truth is that I didn't like the first chapter.

It seems that we are entering a new arc and this beginning seems very good to me. I guess they will announce Fujin as a jounin, a capable elite jounin after some missions so that he can become known in the ninja ranks, after all he can be considered S rank. And it may be that Fujin will become a master jounin after all hiruzen. he wants to increase Fujin's influence for his own plans. (If he becomes a jounin master I hope it is with a new team, in turn this can help Fujin to always be so alone) Apart from all this, Very good work author 👌

Honestly, it's a good move on her part to focus on interacting with Naruto, who wouldn't want the support of a blonde with broken powers. You get more future benefits than disadvantages.

I'm left wanting an entire chapter :c

The protagonist knows that since he arrived in that world there will be slight changes, but he obviously acts that way because he doesn't want to do something that could leave him vulnerable or something that he can't handle in the future.

The idea about these two brothers is good, but I feel like everything moves too quickly from one chapter to the next. And having the older brother reveal so many things about the future and his abilities already reaches a point where it doesn't make sense, making it annoying to read. The idea is good but I think I should re-register everything from 0

These last jutsus, are you sure they were in the library? For example, Jiraya's jutsu, this is his personal jutsu and I don't think he puts it in the library, also to use it you have to have long hair, it's not that this jutsu lengthens your hair and then returns to its natural state. Another Tobirama justus that is a classified that must be in the scroll sealed in the hokage tower, since it is a powerful genjutsu apart from a great weapon against the uchigas

Didn't you see Naruto? Or you don't remember that at that time kirigakure is divided and at war, and the last thing the mei terumi rebel faction wants is to have more enemies. 😐🤨

The Mc is very paranoid with everything until it is annoying, the writing and the development attempt is not understood at all. I really do not recommend reading it.

Are you serious? Robin can read clearly but said she couldn't read out loud "acting like a slum girl" xd

They would trace Robin's origin, investigating the island where she was supposedly born looking for the records of her birth and family, apart from that if they don't find anything, it will clearly be suspicious because there is no information about her. . There is also the matter of Ohara, the navy and the world government are going to look for the inhabitants of that island since they can also take them as a possible threat, in this way they can connect information, since Robin was on a nearby island and not there is no information about her. They were able to figure out that Ace was Roger's son, how can they not figure out who Robin is other than the fact that he also looks a lot like his mom? Probably at first they will let her into the marina but only to keep an eye on her and in a short time they will find out the truth, this way the MC will see him as a suspect.

Vergo's is very different, since he is a partner of Donflamingo. Donflamigo apart from the fact that in the future he will be a shichibukai, he is also a former world noble and he is also someone very powerful in the underworld, he is someone capable with a lot of experience in that matter. On the other hand, the MC doesn't have a very elaborate plan for this, he's doing it very spur-of-the-moment for obvious reasons, which creates a lot of loopholes in this matter.