You keep repeating his name too much

It’s good but you are being somewhat flowery with your words and over the top with descriptions of his feelings

Missing first chapter.

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You should have him ad Ingvild Leviathan

I couldn’t fine you on Patreon 😭.

Please don’t drop this I’m really enjoying it

Please update soon!!! I really enjoy this 👍🏽

I really enjoy this so please update faster 👏🏽

You should consider at some point having him do “The Pursuit of Happiness”

For Kekkai Genkai don’t make it elemental. Have it be the Kaguya clans bone kekkai genkai the reason being that only a Senju’s body is strong enough to handle it and not contract the disease kimmimaru had. Or have would style be a kekkai tota but have him create plant style as a kekkai genkai.

When are you going to update your Naruto story?

-Rukia Kuchiki -Yor Briar -Shinobu Kocho

One of the movies his studio eventually produces should be The Hangover

Missing the first 2 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!

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If sakura’s attitude is changed as a child ino’s would be somewhat affected as well and would be a little more shinobi like. She could also somewhat help him with his physiological problems thanks to her clans teachings.

He would be fascinated of meeting another uzumaki while she would be attracted to his sunny chakra which would feel great for her during her dark times. And could create an uzumaki clan in konoha

Her Bc she doesn’t belong to a clan and would gladly help repopulate. She also as a student of Tsunade would be closer to Hiroto and have more senju based ninja style. U just need to fix her attitude as a child so she isn’t so mean in the future

Whenever he does an animation one of them should be, Avatar The Last Airbender