The_Biblioteka
A place, a collection, a state of mind. The Biblioteka is a conglomerate of stories, carefully chosen and told by an old storyteller, who finds solace in sharing the stories it has been bound to know.
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In addition, there's literally nothing that indicates she gained anything from this defect, it's just an excuse for her to be a big vampire noble mommy, basically, so the part of "not gaining any of the bad parts of the blood disease" means he should've gotten nothing at all.
I know this doesn't matter, but her blood disease is not transmissable since it is a genetic defect that is common amongst inbred nobles, can't remember the exact name now, but if you want to make your character a vampire you're free to do so, just thought this was interesting to point out.
Oops. Yeah, I'll fix that.
the core is locked, the fungus can still breath since it is still spread throughout the area
I appreciate that, especially since the author is essentially saying" having a better brain can turn you into a Laplace's demon", without taking into consideration the sheer amount of information you would need to have in order to accomplish such a feat. There's only so much you can simply say "comic logic" before it starts getting completely ridiculous, thus, boring, specially since the author is explaining things as if they were pure science, when they are really not.
A conglomerate is not made of one single company
I find it amusing that the other commenter is complaining about semicolons and what not, but is not actually pointing out the wrong part of this paragraph, which is that you wrote KBG instead of KGB; other than that, I've seen no agressions to the english language, but I'm not really that well-versed into grammar. What i really wanted to day was that reading your story has made me remember that semicolons and dashes are things that exist, and for that, I thank you, fellow author.
i like that name.
if we are talking about history, the terms genetics was not even existant at the time, and the manuscripts of gregor mendel were not found until 1900, but they don't need to know that, do they?
Completely incorrect. Every MC is special, even if it's simply because the story is being told from their perspective. I've never heard of nor read an story where the mc was a completely average joe, because that wouldn't fulfill the purpose of a story. We don't need every MC to be completely and utterly unfallible and overpowered, yes, but that's a specific type of 'being special'(one that has always been overused). Other than that, your comment about not reading that far is completely pointless, because if it was necessary for a person to read the full story for them to write a review, we wouldn't be here, would we?
I like the way you think, my friend.
Author here. Thanks, I really appreciate it. I find that fanfics have an opportunity to be really great, especially considering the ones in which "all fiction is existent at the same time", so I've been working on this idea for quite some time, trying to make it work to the best of my abilities. There's still much to this universe I made, and things will get pretty interesting when I'm done with this world. Sadly, I have to warn you that this will be a "pokemon harem" type of deal, but I'll try to not fall into the "20 chapters of nothing but fucking his girls" abyss, and try to make it so that at least some of the girls are memorable, and fitting to their canon personalities, of course, some will end up being flings, or limited to their worlds. Once again, I really appreciate your kind words, and I'm happy at least someone likes this little story of mine.
Something of the like, I think, can't remember the details.
It would not be necessary, since those bodies do not have free will.
Almost. It's for Beatrix Potter, a mycologist.
That would be the case, yes. Her infection is similar to mine.
I'd never been more at peace.