new chapters ?

the danmachi arc is so boring

It should have been Erebus since it is a male

ew bro the way mc handled his fiance and the phenex family is so fucking frustrating. iirc lord phenex sent mc to the future or something and his fiance married lord phenex instantly after his disappearance. after fucking over lord phenex getting his title stripped and other shit, mc just let his ex-fiance live with him as he is engaged to his ex-fiance's daughter who is ravel btw, he could have just told them to pay him and fuck off, but the author said no and made mc have some weird and pathetic relationship with the phenex family . it feels like some NTR hentai situation when the ex-fiance asked to stay with him after having 4 kids and asking for forgiveness. sorry for wall of text but I'm so fucking frustrated by it

the drama with Abby and ed went on for far too long just for the author to have a shit cliche conclusion to said drama. I don't remember when they broke up but as of ch 141, I'm assuming the abby drama is done. But I don't feel like reading this, just in case some more stretched-out irritating drama is added again

The author doesn't know how to write scenes when it's supposed to be tense, it isn't, etc. I almost forgot there was a system in this novel and the purpose of said system has the fan-favorite sealed effect, rank 1 mage sealed, charisma 7 sealed Started off well but went downhill fast and there isn't a reason to mention the intelligence of the characters including the mc after all the character can only have the same intelligence as the author

Terribly executed

just read chapter12 demi-god btw, made me lose brain cells. FYI possible jessica pairing

Author doesn't understand how new order works 1. You can only have 2 orders as your limit no matter what. 2. Requirement to using a order is to both touch the object and say it's name . On a living target with a sense of self the user target identity has to align with their own .you can't just go up to nel and say I order nelliel to drop dead since she has amnesia. 3. If the user says they want to have white hair with one order and red eyes with the other you can longer impose another order untill one is cancelled hence returning the hair or eye color back to it's original color . No new order is not omnipotent, no order can be permanent without it using a slot. there is limit to what it can do you can't ask for infinite reiastu . Sorry for the wall of text but I haven't slept and don't feel like doing proper writing

If he can't touch feel or understand energy how can he give the energy order?

You can't just leave it on a cliffhanger like that till Monday

well knowing the author's other works its probably dropped

the hesitation to kill in the beginning killed my mood for the whole chapter

The story would be amazing if the supernatural part didn't exist, the fights in his original world come out as lame when you know he fought Garfiel Tinsel and has been to re:zero. The mc is meh feels like he takes 2 steps forward but takes 2 steps back with every development. and the plot well just like other similar fan-fics is nowhere to be seen the witting is good though,

so did obito do nothing during the war

haqua from the world god only knows

so now we wait a couple hundred years before venelana loses love for will. why would someone who just came out of a 500+ year relationship want to go into another long one. she must have recently lost feeling for zeo, after all, they had rias and you know how low of a chance it is for devils to get pregnant so they must have been going at it for a while. the chapters have been going downhill

why does he care about milicas again ? my half sibling died like 3 years ago and it was not saddening or anything just awkward

The grammar is bad and the mc is dumb or just oblivious to consequences The mc lets events in canon happen when he knows about it. It isn't a bad thing unless you are just going to follow the original story mc had story knowledge he could have gained an upper hand against the king and others with it from the very start mc rejects to join naofumi's party saying about he is a coward and scared. Still lets bitch join and not warn or give a hint to naofumi or do anything. After that it proceeds as it does in canon naofumi gets framed and the mc the very next day after rejecting to be on naofumi's party and letting canon happen the mc asks to be in a party together and be partners. overall its just canon with an oc what a waste of time and what mess of a review