Beyblade_Enjoyer

I try to make 1 chapter a week, when I initially started the story I did 2/3 a week because I had vacation.

Huh I researched about it? Did I do somthing wrong?

The first few chapters are just introductions to be honest this is my first book and I try to improve every time. I will take your advice to mind, the relationships with the characters are starting of slow the Mc Ofcourse already knows adachi and noya. For the story il try and focus on the “Now” aspect of it. I personally think it’s far easier to just write about the now instead of the future or past. Thanks for the comment and advice hopefully you enjoyed the chapter.

No problem! Next chapter will be major for this series if I deliver it well!

Yeah he will learn an elemental clone too but I didn’t say that the shadow clone jutsu would be easy to learn so maybe learning a elemental clone first would be easier

Yeah that makes sense will do!

Read the further chapters he can use the byakugan easily.

What do you mean high level byakugan? His king will be strong but I haven’t even revealed all of its secrets yet the byakugan is just like the series though

Thank you for enjoying the chapter :)

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