You had a good start on the story but it ends suddenly with a lot of questions in the readers minds.
What did happen to Sansa...??!!
What did happen to Marco..??!!
Why did Carlos kidnap her?
etc...
I hope you can continue the story❤🙏
I think the author is very talented in showing the story characters' emotions by playing with words. Very nice descriptions with most effective details. 👌 👍 👏 ❤
A few years ago when an American shoot about 200 person in a stadium, no one said that all Americans are crazy but when the égyptien shoot in New York city, every was afraid of all middle eastern 😔😔