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There aren't enough reviews. Well, I'll write something myself. At the moment. I also ask you to be more tolerant, after all, this is my first novel, besides, my English skills are not good and I periodically have to use an online translator, I hope you will understand. What do I want to bring with my work? Yes, in general, nothing, I just read all the good harem novels that had a fairly large volume, and I got bored, so I thought- " I'm probably not the only one, maybe at least I can help others brighten up the gray everyday life?". That's it!
Pic with sound...
ok, I'll do so)
Thanks, I corrected it.
The demonic heart gives you the ability to use the demonic jewel, in Warren's case, the armor.
Well, he's a 3rd rate villain, so that kind of speech is in its place)
As I wrote in the review, sometimes I have to use an online translator, and due to the fact that in my language not only "it" is used to inanimate objects, but also "he","she", sometimes such problems arise. Thank you for your comments, I have corrected the errors you pointed out.
As for your suggestions, there will soon be a new member of the harem who will be a master of alchemy. And then I will try to avoid the cliche that girls are the engine of the plot, constantly getting into trouble.
There aren't enough reviews. Well, I'll write something myself. At the moment, I can't maintain the stability of the output of chapters, because I need to work, I will try my best to maintain the pace of 1 chapter per day. I also ask you to be more tolerant, after all, this is my first novel, besides, my English skills are not good and I periodically have to use an online translator, I hope you will understand. What do I want to bring with my work? Yes, in general, nothing, I just read all the good harem novels that had a fairly large volume, and I got bored, so I thought- " I'm probably not the only one, maybe at least I can help others brighten up the gray everyday life?". That's it!
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