drunken_undrunk
You can like it, you can dislike it but you can't stop reading it. An ordinary chad trying to write an extraordinary smut.
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drunken_undrunk1mthReplied to AGodAmongMenCh 6 I Have A Mother Now?- drunken_undrunk1mthCommentedCh 42 Lady Liu
- drunken_undrunk1mthCommentedCh 24 Assassin
- drunken_undrunk1mthPosted
Feeling BLESSED to have read this. Currently on chapter 589 and I must say.... The best work I've read in my life. Great Writing with almost no Errors. I'm getting so immersed in this that I literally almost cried in Chapter 588. Story is going great. Slow in-depth pacing that I love the most. Character design is great with slow but sure introduction with background to almost all major characters. Also,most of the writers only write quick happy moments relating to wars but not this one, he describes almost every major hacking and emotional disturbance during the battle immersing one totally to the current events. I don't need to say about updates as it's 15 chapters per week. World background is great as there's a whole goddamn world to discover with each having it's own specialty. At last, I love love love love love your work. Also, R-18 part, those are god damn đ„”. The only problem might be the openness these adhanians follow. Still, if someone wants to immerse in one of the best stories around medieval background Webnovel has to offer and if they can gobble up some ntr and nts in between then it is a must read. GREAT GREAT GREAT work Author. LOVEEEEEEE........ IT...... (â„_â„) (â„_â„) (â„_â„) (â„_â„)
- drunken_undrunk6mthCommented
Please Lunaria, kill that cheap interrogator.
After all, both Lunaria and Celestia had demanded that Erich be brought back to them for a proper medical examination. But this was just the cover they used to see their lover. Once Erich was properly checked to see if he had any injuries, Lunaria sent a message to the GSE, informing Emrys that his protégé was alive, and well. - drunken_undrunk6mthCommented
What sort of an idiot Erich is. Will he just kept collecting one specimen of each species, that too not that of an important character. He should have left her here only. Such an idiot pervy
The banshees did not even bother refusing Erich, they simply escorted him through the halls and towards their ship, we they gave him his own quarters. As for Sinaria she was locked in the brig, where she would wake up to realize her situation shortly thereafter. - drunken_undrunk6mthPosted
70 Chapters in ---A realistic novel. Some minor writing errors;not grammatical. Story pacing is slow as even after 70 chapters only 2 days have passed, if I'm correct. Still, with the amount of bg and the number of characters, it seems slow pacing was too important so can't blame the author. Realistic scenes of fighting for ex. when supposedly female lead was swordfighting with a male, she won after he mistakenly let her get on his back after one single missed strike. She easily cut his head from there, so it was actually quite realistic. World background is actually quite, good. Character development is quite good as even after so many names and characters, I can still understand and remember most of the important cast. OVERALL - until 70 Chapters, Since only a battle scenario has passed, an actually realistic battle full webnovel with great character development and great story to follow.
- drunken_undrunk6mthCommented
Fuxk this, fuxk that,MC is a cuck brat
This last sentence produced an almost imperceptible twitch in Alexander's face as he swore, 'Cam, the deal was you could sleep with Mean anytime you want. Not every other woman!' - drunken_undrunk6mthCommented
Doesn't this mean that she checks all her direct messages. And if not, then how did the MC sent her that message and she found it firsthand.
A direct message appeared in Erika's social media while she was dressing up her hair in a ponytail, which she immediately noticed. Thinking that perhaps it was her manager, she quickly opened the chat to see that it was from someone she was all too familiar with, but had never spoken to in the past. - drunken_undrunk7mthCommentedCh 85 Chapter 85 : Cave Dancing..!? (R18+)
- drunken_undrunk7mthCommented
Eiffel tower now!!!
"Ahha⊠aha⊠continue⊠don't stop." Maria said in a puppy face while moving her ass against his Eiffel tower. But Das still stood without pumping. - drunken_undrunk7mthCommented
Anaconda???
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Two people every second seems just too unreasonable.
Das did not give any time to the opponent to realise what is happening. For each passing minutes, the number of dead bodies increased. He killed two people in each passing second. - drunken_undrunk7mthCommented
did not??
the cosmic beam arrow travelled without any sound⊠Even Das took a second to recognise the hole on the target head. The person is spot dead⊠he did have any chance to utter a single word. - drunken_undrunk7mthCommented
I always thought, if one can see through a body then it must be, possible to look inside the body. isn't it?? Then why nobody writes about the gruesome thing he sees or how he can see the body organs performing their duty.
He easily controlled his eyes sight to see things in whichever way he wants. With a thought in his brain, the visuals changed according his choice. He can control the vision to see through walls, building even through people he can see the other side visuals. - drunken_undrunk7mthCommentedChapter 82 : Trap...!!!
- drunken_undrunk7mthCommentedThe five cars stopped before him and a large mob got down from those five cars. Later a beautiful middle-aged woman who wore a black saree got down from the back seat of the centre customised car with a hasty temper. S