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Silas Ward at 19.

You're 100% correct, planning on making him somewhat less of a sucker...

Thanks for taking the time to read my story. I agree that there is a need for more detail to help readers understand the world and characters better. I haven't outlined anything, and have been writing as I go, ideas coming and going. I'll take your feedback into consideration and add some more clarity and depth to the plot. Overall, I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story so far and am grateful for your support, it means loads to me that someone has actually enjoyed it! Thank you again for your review and your helpful comments.