For now, since it is just the first chapter, I won't be making a detailed review. All I can say for now is keep up the good work! I will be waiting for the next chapter when it arrives.

Hmmm i could see that there is some improvement. Keep it up.

Hmm... hiding his ability like Kiyopon, I see...

YATTA!

Oh ho ho. The turning point is near.

oh boy oh boy

Me, a math nerd, be like: wait til you get to linear law.

awww... I was hoping Sui-san would fight. Well, that was a good fight though!

hohoho...

Hmm... interesting. You like Genshin? Well, this chapter is pretty good. Easy to understand for a guy like me who gets bored really easily.

OwO So this story is inspired by cote. COTE with magic. This chapter is pretty good and yes, it is pretty interesting. Now, I should continue reading and see if my predictions are correct.

Hmmm... so far so good. Again, there are some grammatical errors. I think some editing would do it some good again. I would say the paragraphs were a bit too packed, so maybe separating a few of the sentences into shorter ones would be good.

When I saw that name of the academy, it just reminds me of COTE.

The narration is pretty good. Sorry if I am rude, but I did notice some grammatical errors. Making a quick edit or two will help make the chapter better.