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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    well. humans have the greatest endurance.

    Since the horses hadn't been able to burn off energy in quite some time, they were willing to run for nearly two hours before needing a break. Trenton had originally picked the horses because the breeds were known for their endurance.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    Eat slow mate, humans digest more quickly when they eat slowly...

    After eating quickly to avoid the awkwardness in the dining hall, he and Trenton were about to bid each other s good day and return to their usual tasks, but they saw a horse galloping through the opening of the fortress with no rider on its back.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    your book really deserves contract. Such a shame that bad books get contracted while yours is not.

    Ch 29 Heavy Thoughts
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    I'm starting to get scared that he really skipped leg day.

    The way he still walked in a way that lacked confidence told her he didn't have any idea how his shoulders seemed to have broadened or how his chest barely fit into his old tattered shirt anymore. If she had more money, she would try to dress him more properly.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    I'm sorry to say,but i always hate it when only arms are mentioned as grown in size. Please give respect to shoulder,back,chest,obliques,legs,glutes,neck and calf.

    "Your arms have doubled in size," Sir Alix observed, glancing up from the bowl he was hunched over. "You don't look like a teenager anymore." 
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    no chapter??????

    Ch 27 Hit Me
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Replied to AzuritePaladin

    expert.

    "You naughty boy," the baroness said. "Not tonight, honey… I'm still married, so we can only play like this okay~"
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    Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa
    Fantasy · melonball
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    bro he did one shot today and his libido is at half capacity? A man should shot at least 5 times a day not 4 much less shooting 1 and only having half energy left.

    Devon groaned, sexually frustrated. He was at half capacity when it came to his libido at the moment because he already had sex earlier today, but even half capacity was a lot to manage. It felt like his libido skyrocketed ever since his stint in purgatory. Again, maybe that was another hidden perk that he received but didn't get any information on.
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    Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    Finally. Bulking season starts.

    "We've got to build up your muscle somehow."
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    that guy needs to train with sword real quick. His inexperienced movements and awkward fights makes this novel really boring.

    Blushing, the blonde nymph covered her eyes with her fingers while waving bye to Devon. With a satisfied grin on his face and his ballsacks empty of semen, Devon filled his canteen full of water and slung the moonlight longsword across his back and began the long journey back to town, on foot.
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    Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    well,to be a good swordsman you dont need big and wild swings, you need precise and as much as small movements to take down the enemy. But if you are fighting with several people you need to occupy the space so it's okay to do wild big swings. And footwork is very important as well. You shouldn't stand at one place forever,you need to move always. Though they are in the water so do not know anything.

    However, just being in good physical shape did not make one a good swordsman. It was a prerequisite to a certain extent, yes, but the ancient skill of killing with swords had a bit more finesse to it than simply giving a chimpanzee a sharp metal stick.
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    Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
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    Now one real quick tip, no people used sharp swords to train,or a light duel like that. Not only it's dangerous it could also cause the edges of sword to destroy. I think replacing sharp swords with training swords would be better. Though that would take away the excitement so I understand why you chose that

    Ch 26 Testing My Skill
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    Chapters keep improving!

    Ch 7 Taking on the boss solo
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    Tower Of Sin
    Urban · OnlySupremeOne
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    she*

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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
    Fantasy · Alex_morg
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Posted

    You got a good plot. Story development and your writing style is very good. I admire your writing skills. MC looks dope. The reason why I didn't give 5 stars is that you didn't upload the chapter for 10 days! Please release chapters more frequently

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    Revelations of the end
    Fantasy · Genji09
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Posted

    It's a fresh story. The author's writing skills are good. Comedy is not much but it's there makes you warm up to you story. Mc is cool,and comedy character,and MC using a sword even added better feelings to me!

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    Sovereign Of Wrath: Rise Of The Demonic God
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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    zoradante1yr
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    Damn,he almost thought his powers were more important than that,I would give him a good trashing beating if I was the author.

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    Sovereign Of Wrath: Rise Of The Demonic God
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    zoradante1yr
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    common twelve inches of .... MC

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    Sovereign Of Wrath: Rise Of The Demonic God
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Commented

    Curious? Small or large calves?

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    Sovereign Of Wrath: Rise Of The Demonic God
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • zoradante
    zoradante1yr
    Posted

    A fresh novel with romance genre! I like it. King Keep up with new chapters! You will surely get a good place in the romance contest and hopefully get a contract! This king believes you.

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    Taming his dark moon
    Fantasy · purpleflame78
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