literl010
of reading
1397
Read books
Badges
3Moments
243
literl0106dPostedWriting quality is above average for WN, although there are some grammar issues it's not too distracting. Story is quite slow paced, that's not a bad thing, but just something to be aware of. The reason for the 3/5 is the protagonist. I just can't find him likeable or relatable at all, I think he must have ran a prank channel before he was reincarnated. His behaviour has already had tragic consequences, with his servant getting beaten and repped, and he continues with stuff like putting his finger in his aas and smearing it on another guy's face... Yeah it's meant to be comedy, but it's just too juvenile. It's a shame, because if it weren't for his attitude, I'm sure I'd enjoy it, but as is, I just can't.
- literl0109dCommented
*his
After waiting for 30 minutes with no visitors, someone finally entered her live stream! - literl0109dCommented
What did she correct? It's the same sentence.
"Make it up to us," Kanade corrected. - literl0109dCommentedCh 18 Chapter 18: Beauty Among Predators?
- literl01017dCommentedCh 34 Ch 33 The Breedening
- literl01023dCommented"Nii-san..." Suzune muttered yet Manabu was frozen in place, sporting a blank look. Suzune grew a bit flustered and repeated herself, "Nii-san."
- literl01025dCommentedCh 32 Ch 31 Green Skins
- literl01028dCommentedCh 31 Ch 30 Bloodied Return
- literl01028dCommented
Hehehe
"Good thing half breeds are exceedingly rare....or I'd surely be pregnant by now..." Florence spoke and a faint blush appeared across her face as her pussy quivered strangely while she did her best to squeeze out all the thick baby batter. - literl01030dCommentedCh 30 Ch 29 Carnage Under A Flower Moon
- literl0101mthCommentedCh 27 Ch 26 Prayers Shall Save None...
- literl0101mthCommentedCh 26 Ch 25 True Fear Has Long Ears
- literl0101mthCommentedCh 17 Aquarium: Killing Racist Dolphins 1
- literl0101mthReplied to literl010
Author reply (blocked by WN): "It isn't assault what the Deep did. It was scummy extortion of a exual favor. Starlight is stronger than him when he out of the water, remember? But like I said, you don't have to worry about her sucking fish sticks this time" --- I guess, been a while since I've seen that scene. Still, his attitude regarding the blackmail/coercion seems jarring, maybe I'm absolving Starlight from her actions too much, idk. Still, looking forward to find out what happens next :)
Archie wasn't a cuck, but he also wasn't some knight in shining armor who couldn't handle the fact that women might have had a wild streak before he came along. If he just wanted to marry lovely virgins, he could simply go to the Middle East and marry a hundred young spouses or something. But he was not that bored. If he was really that bored, he'd just off all the guys his future partners had been with, unless they were virgins - which didn't make much sense, except on some websites he used to browse while reading in his past life. - literl0101mthCommented
There's a big difference between accepting a partner's history and deciding not to prevent exual assault.
Archie wasn't a cuck, but he also wasn't some knight in shining armor who couldn't handle the fact that women might have had a wild streak before he came along. If he just wanted to marry lovely virgins, he could simply go to the Middle East and marry a hundred young spouses or something. But he was not that bored. If he was really that bored, he'd just off all the guys his future partners had been with, unless they were virgins - which didn't make much sense, except on some websites he used to browse while reading in his past life.