I meant 2nd lol

Since I'm being shameless; this will be my shameless review as well. Personally, I feel like I need to give characters more of a face that people can picture when reading. Also, I would like to complain about the length of the chapters, because between you and me it takes me forever to finish writing but I can stand not going into detail to do something right so sometimes things might get a little dragged out. Example this review. P.S - I'm not giving myself 5 stars because I, as the Writer know I have a ways to go especially since this is the first book I'm writing. P.P.S - You don't have to follow my example and give 4 stars, nothing stopping you from giving me 5 stars. hehe

Think I'll be a little shameless here and claim the first chapter comment for the whole story since nobodies interested in it.

This is an interesting book with a lot of character interaction, and a lot of originality, but lacks character design. it's hard to put a face to a name would be great if you could give us a vague description of the characters.

Personally, I feel that there needs to be a little bout detail in a chapter the amount of interaction is fine but it feels like as a reader I'm just listening to a conversation on the side; but it is interesting. Personally im not that big of a fan to the romance genre.

I've read through the 3 chapters available and I can say that I'm interested in how the author plans to take this book. It's only 3 chapters so I don't have a lot to go with... also I'm only giving 4 stars because you don't need that many hyphens to separate one part of the chapter from another.

read the first few chapters and I can say its a pretty interesting book that i'll be adding to my reading list for later on. Personally, I read a lot and so prefer books with longer chapters so i would have more to read but short chapters are also good when done right

honestly, I'm kinda at a loss. I know it said R18 but that prologue caught me off guard. I think this book has potential, especially when more chapters are added and the story develops more.

Those are famous last words my friend.

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Harumi: Stareeeeee. Frank: ...Harumi, why are you looking at me like that? Harumi: I-I don't know

Now that sounds oddly familiar Love the reference and if it's not I still love this paragraph for reminding me of one of my favorite series. You got my respect!

My inner thoughts laughing at me as I realize the system said 'Temporary"

Well, that's what I call freedom of choice. System: You can Leave whenever you want. MC: Ok, cool I would like to leave then. System: you sure? *DING* [Mission Prompt]

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