Congratulations on finishing the book! Any desire to write another one?

Aww it's coming to an end! Though I do like shorter stories. I definitely want an update on Angela, future cousins, and maybe a flashback to happy days with the mom and dad. Also who is Angela's dad?

Aaawww! Clean skin, clean clothes, and a clean bed. And a trip to see Angela! Totally new page for her! I feel like this chapter was made for me lolz!

Wow... So much going on this chapter.

Gosh I'm smiling because they're smiling! At least it looks like she will get some family time. Wonder what is up with the new cast of characters.

Bro I have been desperately waiting for this chapter! I'm glad she was just as annoyed with his proposal as I was. Glad to see him squirm. You can really see his insecurities in this part. Gosh... If only he'd take things slower and give her space to be herself, at least from now on, their relationship would be significantly better in the long haul. Can he really not help but be manipulative? That ring is definitely suspicious and ~totally~ not a shackle in disguise. Bet the egg is her payment for freedom or a dowry. Gosh I want her to be a Phoenix mama. I also really want her new stations to be announced soon so she can sleep on a nice bed and get some softer clothes. She desperately needs some family bonding time. With the preggers sister too.

Cain was a hot mess this chapter. The honesty is refreshing but he needs to work on being consistently honest with her. Wish the proposal wasn't an 'exchange.' Really cheapens the proposal, Duke. For their engagement, she needs to live in a different building and send some time with her family. She needs to develop a new sense of self that is not wholly dependent on him.

Oh my goodness I wasn't expecting ANY of that! Owwww did he sign a contract with the old creepy dude? Same path as Kendrick? His mom definitely had something to do with this. Also really creepy he did all of that. Wasn't he supposed to be busy all of the time? But I guess it's not out of character for him...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. There is so much to analyze in this chapter where would I even begin? I will probably end up re-reading this chapter like 10 times.

Hi I'm back again! Couldn't figure out how to update my previous review. Everything I said before still holds true till now (Chapter 57). Characters still have depth and complexity to them. However, we now have a magic system that was introduced after the characters and setting were well established. I find this quite refreshing as we got to know the characters as people before we indulged in some of the fantasy elements that I adore. The magic system is slowly revealed, as the main character is fairly ignorant. So far so good. The cast has also expanded and new conflicts are arising. I'm just sitting at the edge of my seat hoping that everything turns out okay for the main character!

Wow... Uncle maybe? Didn't expect that. The duke better not get defensive and apologize genuinely if he wants a shot at a healthy marriage This could go downhill so fast...

The Making of a Yandere: Part 1. Man, I love this so much! We rarely get to see the internal thoughts of a young yandere in training. Disturbing how he viewed Isabelle as a perfect pawn. However, it's probably the only lens he had to view the world. He did not have an internal archetype for love or friendship, which is the parents' shortcomings. Hopes to healthier thoughts in the future!

Darn I wanted to see the reveal moment! Anyway I'm glad they know their relationship. I hope she gets formally recognized as his daughter and the duke isn't too much of a butt head about it. Lolz it might actually make it easier for her to become the duchess due to a rise in status. However, he is probably going to take it as Kendrick taking her away from him. Ideally their relationship can mature as she becomes a noble woman outside of the Duke's house and family. A bit of space would probably do them some good. Also former duchess was probs a witch or knew one

Yyyyaaaasssss! This is what I have been waiting for! Can't wait for the next chapter! Her anxiety and self depreciation feel so real it's hard to read.

While I love the steamy moments and the evolution of their relationship, I want a convo between father and daughter.

No! No! No! I don't like this at all! Justin you better be amenable to other solutions or else you are going to end up being the villain of the story and I don't want that for you!

Owww... Maybe she can see her dad's true appearance? Wonder if the duke or mage will draw too much attention to her or the past with her mother

Owww it's the dad! I guessed that he was a king but I didn't know that there was a magic system. I'm guessing that he wasn't informed of her birth because he doesn't seem like a POS. Wonder why Justin thinks he can win with an arrow?

Also, love the supernatural element and how it is weaved in later in the story when the characters and world building are already established.

I simp for this chapter! I hope the guest is part of the paternal family. I'm fully expecting some angst or friction after their relationship has been progressing smoothly.