nostalgicoldman

this is style is just fine in all honesty

also i don’t know if you noticed this but you use the word like abit too much😭but great book

tbh when i tried reading this a couple of months back i kept getting frustrated by certain events but reading it again it’s actually really good though the grammars lacking i truly wouldn’t mind if the author used ai to clean it up a bit but all else aside 100% do read ps. ignore any hate comments you’ve seen from me on it😭

also don’t listen to the comments saying it’s good or whatever i mean it’s good slop but not a good novel

all i can call this is slop tbh trashy translation, stories so bad there were point i wished his son just up and died

no it was a mistake it was meant to be the other way around else he wouldn’t have been able to buy the page

are you schizophrenic or (DID) or are there actually 5 different individuals using this account?

and try use it to polish the story not expand on jt

author be honest did you use ai for the first 50 chapters? well not like there’s anything wrong with it but try proofreading to make the story feel natural

good story good grammar but boy pacing is bad i mean horrible how that one fight 25 chapters long i had to take a break and let the chapter get past the fight to wait to start reading it again but apart from that that i’d say it’s really good