Shameless review by your boy King Noran here. So, this is a story I've been wanting to work on for a while now. I really like supernatural and fantasy stuff (the tragedy and dark fantasy part is nothing, I just find them more interesting and... realistic? Whatever). I will not abandon my other novel [Adam: The Vagabond]. I'll just repeat it here, I will be splitting time.

The words are poetic and lovely as a Shakespeare original. There's this hint of longing as you read the characters and the events, plus the subtle but important details make the story beautiful and seamless. Would recommend, definitely worth a try.

thanks for reading my stuff mate. my stomach's not doing well so forgive me for not updating a chapter

Okay, first the good points. Images are vivid because of the clear and detailed narrative. The story is somewhat interesting, and author is playful with words. However, the bad points lie in the synopsis. The author was 'lazy', which is not a word you want to use since it's an X for most, a turn off. There's also stuff like the narrative breaking the fourth wall on the first chapter, not a fan. Well, you might think that its a bad novel, its not. Its good actually, and the points I pointed out are rather minor. Good work author!

It's a fun to read book with a lot of good humor. There's... unique, elements at play like a god, well, just read it i cant explain hahaha. Its a good book.

fixed, brother.

{This bracket} for onomatopoeia is now minimalized and in the later chapters, completely vanished. tnx for the insight!

trying to fix it now. tnx!

the [brackets like this] actually is conversation with the nymph, and (brackets like this are Adam's reply to them.) I have decided to use 'Parenthesis' for the other's thoughts or simply narrate theirs but yeah I'm keeping them because it will get even more confusing without them (for me, I think).

yeah, it was supposed to be "what a weird lady." fixed it. thanks for the insight

There's actually a similar filipino story to this titled "Darna" so it gave me a little sense of nostalgia. It's a great novel with a good main character. There are some improvements needed but what doesn't? I recommend reading this!

Author here, Just wanna let the viewers know that I minimalized the use of {brackets} due to complaints about it. Thank you so much for your insights. Please, do not hesitate to point more things out. As the author, it's my duty to give you all the best experience. Leave a review or a paragraph comment. Don't worry if I don't reply, I read them! Much love.

Not my type of genre, but it is a good bittersweet story. I do suggest using other pronouns/nouns/names other than "I" because it gets repetitive but other than that, great work author! You portrayed their feelings well.

This is written differently amongst other cultivations novels and in a good way.The early chapters started intense, which I personally like because my novel started like that too. I think this will be a great novel, so i recommend reading it!

I... I don't know what to say. The story is great. The characters, you can feel their emotions seep through the text and into you. This is just amazing. Recommended. Just read it.

It's a nice and rather intense story with good morals. The world building and the aspects of reality are unique and complex, making it an awesome pair! Would recommend to people out there with a craving for superheroes.

This novel is simply excellent. The executions of the lines are great, and the characters are unique and complex in a good way. A Most importantly, that seamless writing! A must read!

It's a great novel with potential. Written beautifully and seamless. There are some slightly confusing lines, but I'm not to judge since I write with flaws as well. Definitely worth atleast a try.

There was a line somewhere that said 'angle' and i cant remember but there are more

Quite the large world you made here. There are typos here and there though. There are many interesting elements at play, and since it's just the start and that chapters are still blurry, I will see how it plays out.