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King_Noran

King_Noran

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Just a filipino guy who writes for fun, started to write last year and loved it ever since. I'm still not good but I hope you teach me the ropes along the way. Let's hang out! Discord: Ken Ken#2675

2021-04-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    Shameless review by your boy King Noran here. So, this is a story I've been wanting to work on for a while now. I really like supernatural and fantasy stuff (the tragedy and dark fantasy part is nothing, I just find them more interesting and... realistic? Whatever). I will not abandon my other novel [Adam: The Vagabond]. I'll just repeat it here, I will be splitting time.

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    Mask: The Devil's Advocate
    Magical Realism · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    The words are poetic and lovely as a Shakespeare original. There's this hint of longing as you read the characters and the events, plus the subtle but important details make the story beautiful and seamless. Would recommend, definitely worth a try.

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    Reborn: Kissing a Knight [GL]
    LGBT+ · GCarre
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Andry_Reyes

    thanks for reading my stuff mate. my stomach's not doing well so forgive me for not updating a chapter

    Ch 7 Chapter 6: Flowers
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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    Okay, first the good points. Images are vivid because of the clear and detailed narrative. The story is somewhat interesting, and author is playful with words. However, the bad points lie in the synopsis. The author was 'lazy', which is not a word you want to use since it's an X for most, a turn off. There's also stuff like the narrative breaking the fourth wall on the first chapter, not a fan. Well, you might think that its a bad novel, its not. Its good actually, and the points I pointed out are rather minor. Good work author!

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    A World Where Normal People Don't live
    Fantasy · Afismus
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    It's a fun to read book with a lot of good humor. There's... unique, elements at play like a god, well, just read it i cant explain hahaha. Its a good book.

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    My Kaiju Chicken vs Systems
    Fantasy · Bad_Totodile
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Andry_Reyes

    fixed, brother.

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Clone_v2

    {This bracket} for onomatopoeia is now minimalized and in the later chapters, completely vanished. tnx for the insight!

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Clone_v2

    trying to fix it now. tnx!

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Clone_v2

    the [brackets like this] actually is conversation with the nymph, and (brackets like this are Adam's reply to them.) I have decided to use 'Parenthesis' for the other's thoughts or simply narrate theirs but yeah I'm keeping them because it will get even more confusing without them (for me, I think).

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to Clone_v2

    yeah, it was supposed to be "what a weird lady." fixed it. thanks for the insight

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    There's actually a similar filipino story to this titled "Darna" so it gave me a little sense of nostalgia. It's a great novel with a good main character. There are some improvements needed but what doesn't? I recommend reading this!

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    Meteor Powers
    Sci-fi Romance · Sumayya_Riaz
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    Author here, Just wanna let the viewers know that I minimalized the use of {brackets} due to complaints about it. Thank you so much for your insights. Please, do not hesitate to point more things out. As the author, it's my duty to give you all the best experience. Leave a review or a paragraph comment. Don't worry if I don't reply, I read them! Much love.

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    Adam: The Vagabond
    Fantasy · King_Noran
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    Not my type of genre, but it is a good bittersweet story. I do suggest using other pronouns/nouns/names other than "I" because it gets repetitive but other than that, great work author! You portrayed their feelings well.

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    I fell in love with my sister's boyfriend
    LGBT+ · KV_Cleo
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    This is written differently amongst other cultivations novels and in a good way.The early chapters started intense, which I personally like because my novel started like that too. I think this will be a great novel, so i recommend reading it!

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    Lord Qui, I'm Nothing But a Mere Mortal
    Fantasy Romance · Sky_Li
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    I... I don't know what to say. The story is great. The characters, you can feel their emotions seep through the text and into you. This is just amazing. Recommended. Just read it.

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    Back For My Daughter
    Magical Realism · HaoShu
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    It's a nice and rather intense story with good morals. The world building and the aspects of reality are unique and complex, making it an awesome pair! Would recommend to people out there with a craving for superheroes.

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    Sparror Volume 1
    Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    This novel is simply excellent. The executions of the lines are great, and the characters are unique and complex in a good way. A Most importantly, that seamless writing! A must read!

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    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy · Andry_Reyes
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    It's a great novel with potential. Written beautifully and seamless. There are some slightly confusing lines, but I'm not to judge since I write with flaws as well. Definitely worth atleast a try.

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    Five Month Before The End Game
    Fantasy Romance · Yulinda246
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Replied to King_Noran

    There was a line somewhere that said 'angle' and i cant remember but there are more

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    A girl named sin
    Fantasy Romance · Nebula18457
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran1yr
    Posted

    Quite the large world you made here. There are typos here and there though. There are many interesting elements at play, and since it's just the start and that chapters are still blurry, I will see how it plays out.

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    A girl named sin
    Fantasy Romance · Nebula18457
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