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to criticize in this story, the pace is good, I was surprised, I didn't find any point perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what's happening in the scene besides always make me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER
you can publish without problem I authorize
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very good best story i've read i can't wait for other chapters ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok hhyykiffurieeieiieirieiriririririririririririiriririririri