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No problem love the new title btw, seems a lot more eye catching
Glad to see you're back, did your previous account get hacked?
Hi thank you very much for your comment!!! I'm not sure what you ment by that question at the end, but if it's about the release schedule then chapters will be out when they're done with me aiming for 2 chapters weekly at least. Also they might be postponed if I don't keep out with outlining since I decided to not write unless I have outlined 10 chapters ahead at least
Hi thank you very much your message I'm really grateful for your support now for your questions The one doing the chasing depends on the world for example MC will be very heavily on the attack in the 3rd world as for the current arc it will be revealed during 10th chapter. The story is not poly but there is 2nd female lead, don't worry she already has her own love interest arranged and there are some straight/gay couples in the supporting cast to (possibly there will be some extras about one of them but I'm not sure) Now for the main plot, it's mostly in the background happening at the end of each world and interludes with the addition of some dream sequences in the arcs proper. Now for some additional warnings FL will be a bit yanderish later on, but nothing major. While you wait I recommend you try Don't be Jealous I Will Bend Myself (finished Qt GL unfortunately translation website got taken down but you can still find epub/pdf scans of high quality translation, it's really great with an exception for one arc was the first qt novel I've read), Running Away Hand in Hand with the 2nd Female Lead (great ongoing GL), and Vicious Supporting Female Character And The White Lotus Female Lead (ongoing QT GL) I really look foreward to receiving your feedback once you decide to read this novel!
K still I'd recommend you try out grammarly it really cuts out a lot of time spent on checking and can just be running in the background while you focus on writing, also in my personal opinion changing the Rhis/Yelenna's to [Name of character] POV is stylistically better and less confusing for new readers
Thanks for the chapter mate! Btw are you looking for an editor by any chance? I can't promise I'll do it with any sort of regularity and won't ditch you once the school starts, but I feel that your story could reach a much wider audience if some errors were to smoothen out. If you're not interested in that I'd recommend you download grammarly their algorythm is pretty good at fixing common errors and is free.
Thanks for the chapter! I would love to see an urban setting arc at some point in the future, especially of highschool to college type. I feel like they are almost always at least decent in qt novels and help with showing the characters of the leads in a low stake environment.
Thanks for the chapter! btw it kinda feels like we're getting close to end of the arc and I think it would be cool if you could make some sort of epilogue chapter before the next one quickly summarizing the next one (don't know what you have planned so if it doesn't fit let's just pretend I said nothing) some other qt novels kinda just cut from finishing the mission back to the interludes and it feels kinda jaring, but that's just my preference and I understand that some might feel differently