Wow, author. Lovely book. What a twist to life! Very exciting plot though it would be better with better grammar. I know an editor who can help you out with that. Contact me if you are considering this option. but otherwise, nice book

A wonderfully done piece! Applaud for the author. With a well thought of plot, the novel proceeds on steadily with no hiccups along the way. nice work.

Sky, what the heck is in your head? Whatever it is, keep it there. Encore for another job well done. Love the twist and tinge of dark romance. Surely a new favorite. Keep up the good work Sky

well, thanks for the feed back. It's a little confusing, I apologize. Well, it's a draft . I hadn't realized that I had published but let me finish editing and rewriting and you will get it in it's better form. Also, thanks for the support. You'll get a mention 😉

better phrasing needed

could have been phrased better

Loving the creativity of the author! What an interesting way to open our minds! Truly intriguing and mind capturing. The first chapter says it all. Good job author

Lovely first chapter. Really had me hoping for more. It's not your usual cliche start so, applause for you author/translator

thanks

thanks lots

Mind captivating title, good characters and nice synopsis. Good work author. An almost impossible love, will they happen or not? Can't wait to find out

Wow, what an interesting way to make transmigration fun. I personally love the ML's personality, pure and holy. This should become a recommended read. Good work Glimmy

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Luciana as a character is very interesting with her flamboyance and her quick wit. Oscar on the other hand, tsk. Overall, a very nice book and good development. Bravo

I feel the minutes are too much

hehe, then I would have to comment again😉😏

i feel this would have been phrased better

thanks