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Hello, I read your fanfic and/or novel, how to say it, it's interesting, it didn't catch me, but it's okay, the question is: the protagonist will be bad, ok, he has a system or quasi-system, and he's also training everything well, but I don't know, it feels like everything is very rigid, not something natural.

Bueno me doy una calificación promedio para alguien nuevo como yo creo que está bien ...................................................................

A por cierto si hay partes mal escritas perdon no estuve atento intentaré si hay otro capítulo evitar tener esos errores gracias

Bueno me pongo 4 por qué no se cuando volveré a publicar otro capítulo así que a esperar ......................................................................

As I read in a comment, it's a good fic. The annoyance is that there are more than 130 chapters just about the elves. It's very annoying in that part, but after that it's fine. I still haven't left the elves since the reading is very heavy for me. I just have to wait for it to improve.

As always, an incredible work, I only hope that the author does not try to force easily solvable events, but without removing that point, it is the best work I have read in a long time.

Please, author, you have to pass the exams and continue with this great novel, I ask you, I cannot be calm because of the intrigue of what will happen.

I love it but please upload more chapters and it is also one of the best fanfics I have read, if not the best, I will wait for more chapters, sir, author, and if it is not too much trouble that Pink has a pearl, thank you

Well, your story is very good, an interesting idea but it's not because I'm a writer or something, but I don't see a general context of humanity, for example, no one goes to another world and it's so calm, and also following the story is good, but you have to see the context of the human, and in the future, Garnet is strong, but not like a diamond, and if everything happens as it will, it's not fun. Please just observe it, thank you.

Brother, the idea is great but why do you limit yourself so much to not doing anything literally? If one of the main characters hits the protagonist, he can't defend himself because of the goddess. It was for him to simply appear and discover his powers, but now he feels stuck and can't do anything.