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- raid_force3 years agoReplied to DelzGB
I hpe there will be no romance and for mc to be as paragmatic as possible
- raid_force3 years agoCommented
Same as WOMW just have some innovation will you
This paragraph has been deleted. - raid_force3 years agoReplied to Bird_0f_Hermes
FIRST OF AUTHOR I THINK THIS NOVEL IS FOR KIDS, EVERY THING IN THE NOVEL IS A BIT FORCED. INDRODUCING A NEW CHARACTER TO US SHOULDN'D BE DONE THIS WAY. OZUL SAVES A GIRL IN DISTRESS IN SOME ALLEYWAY, THEN THE KIDS BECOME PAMPERED AND FORGETS HIS GOOD DEEDS WHILE DEMANDING MORE OF HIM. I WOULD PERFER IT IF SHE WERE HIS SLAVE INSTEAD. THE WORLD BUILDING IS BAD AND REALLY THE CHARACTERS I HAVE IN THE FIRST 25 CHAPTERS HAVE NO DEPTH. I READ THIS NOVEL WHEN I SAW THE TAG ANTIHERO. BUT ALL YOU HAVE GIVEN ME IS HERO. MC SHOULD BE SELFISH AND LOOK FOR BENFIETS FOR HIM SELF. NOT A LOVING AND GIVING MC WHO CAN'T DEAL WITH A LITTLE KID. I KNOW THIS IS YOUR FIRST BOOK BUT THIS IS TOO MUCH. ANY HOW, I WISH YOU GOOD LUCK
- raid_force3 years agoReplied to Bird_0f_Hermes
is their a power system that gives you more life span the more you advance?
- raid_force4 years agoCommented
is their any ranks here as a metric of strength? and once mc ranks up does it increase his life span?
- raid_force4 years agoCommented
being strong is good but if his life span is only 100 yrs? then what's the point?