mafy_derrich

This is one of the most frustrating things ever, could have been good but with all the flashbacks the story hardly progress, long winded dialogues damn. Damn every single person. don’t need this damn; all substance lost.

Over 20

A prologue lasting over 10 chapters. I hope the whole novel is not like this.

I hate this novel. It’s stupid, no lemons well I will be damned. I hate the misogynistism. I find no pleasure reading this..

I disagree, I think the cultivation realms are quite confusing and not properly introduced. Considering this is a cultivation novel, if readers are not able to properly and simply and gauge the strength of realms then the novel will be a pain to read. This novel does too much unnecessarily. Even during dual cultivation the do too much damn .. I find simplicity always makes a clear plot.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Sometimes this type of cliche novel plot is like a breath of relaxing fresh air😏

Let’s see where this goes[img=proud]

Am done, this is simply 🤬