Definitely a great start. It's very ambitious so far, and I can see the potential here. This is a big leap from the author's other work but I have faith. Keep it up!
The Accidental Liberator (SI ASOIAF,GOT ) Rewriting
This is great stuff so far. It's rare to find stories like this that are relatively simple and yet so satisfying to read. Now we just need more chapters. I hope the author keeps it up!
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