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The photo of the tower
For me Malissa is like those ex fiancee in the cultivation novels who's going to get face a slapping after a hundred chapter. Sometimes I can't help but think what will happen if Jeremy go full on cultivation mc mode and started face slapping young masters/people(there should be no young masters in this novel until you decided to write it that would be interesting Jeremy vs young masters)
Hey author why isn't he using steal on the 29 people who ran away shouldn't he steal attributes from them as much as possible they shouldn't be necessary for his plan anymore because they are no longer a part of the shelter/clan...(sorry I forgot what you called them)đ Also can he use 'steal' of monster's/demons it would be op but I aren't the talents suppose to use against monster/demon Anyways loved the chapter
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What extent will he go for his woman's.Like if one of them provokes a high level being than him.Will he risk his life for it.It will help show MCs cold hearted/ruthlessness and show his motivation that he will not take risks for even his own family or a mc who cares about his family more than his life/benifits
It is a good start.But I have some questions regarding the mc 1.What is his moral line? 2.What type of villain will he be?Will he be manipulation type who works from the dark or a muddle headed who just smash with his body 3.HAREM/ROMANCE(PLease noooo!!!) or it will be like any other stories