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DaoistH7599X

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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X17h
    Replied to I_Am_YourDad

    And you re drowning in the depths of your intelligence.

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    Dc: start in Young Justice
    Anime & Comics · overFantasies
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1d
    Replied to I_Am_YourDad

    you are like those chinese youtube short advertisers, answering made up questions about your products.

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    Dc: start in Young Justice
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X13d
    Replied to Lonely_Hermit98

    Cancer is fundamentaly related to entropy itself, life is about resisting this fundamental law temporarily and pass down this cycle of resistence to new offsprings, it is natural to age, and it is natural to develop cancer, even more natural now because we developed many ways to resist aging through our understanding of the world and bodies and disease related deaths that humans live much longer then generations upon generations of their ancestors did and our genetic makeup, genetic niche( if we could call it that) is not familiar to living this long, it might change in about a 100k year if we don't bring our end by ourselves before that. And it is not like our body has no defense against it or something like that, your body fights against cancerous formations constantly you re just not aware of it, it resists till it can't keep up with the errors happening in your cells. We need to accept that we are flawed existences, even our bodies defense mechanism against cancer cells is through cells and leukemias, lymphomas are about the canceration of these cells that constantly fight against it.

    "Well, I did create it, but the cure has been around for many years, with it simply being hidden. After all, cancer is like a treasure trove for the government, and I just publicised it on a whim, along with a permanent cure that can be given to newborn children, effectively eradicating the problem of cancer after a generation or two."
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X19d
    Replied to Galaxy_angel

    No you did not, you saw my comment, went to your alter account and wrote this with this account which all you ever did was praise your story in paragraph comments, mr author.

    "Wha? I'm Matsuda! I've been sitting next to you for most of the year! How could you forget?" The child yells, alerting the entire class to the fact that I forgot his name.
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    Side Character DxD
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X19d
    Replied to Hixpean

    İ don't have a problem with him being panicked and not in the right mind after the event if it was definite that he had his previous world's character in totality and only the memories of kingpin's son, it is general discontent of the things happening thus far and after i have problem with,i could have worded it better my fault there , i just made a casual comment for the story on paragraph comments, anyway absolutely no reason to stay in gotham, the inconsistent psyche of the mc where at times it is insuniated that there is an other identity, person in his head and at other times only the memories are mentioned and the voice in his head treated as nonexistent, after this he is forced to work for penguin and take care of the kid which are both forced to the story along with his costume's discovery, throughout the long time he worked at the shop he always acted in character of his previous world except for his bõnnər for roses, then comes the casual killings and fights, and lastly adrenaline's effect are not definite in clouding the judgement, in general it makes focusing and remembering( the mind remembers things better when it involves a perceived threat) better and force us to make quick judgements thus deeper level thinking like planning , reasoning and conclusion making becomes harder but that is the case of normal people of this day, trained people have much greater control over these things( they don't need to be trained to extremes, don't get the idea that it is too hard and needs years upon years of training) and actually thrive in life threatening situations when it comes to reasoning skills, an example that can be seen often in casual populace is exam students, many student perform better in the last quarter of an exam where stress and adrenaline is higher.

    Wait, How does he know where I live?
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    The Rose (DC Universe Fanfic)
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X20d
    Commented

    i may have been convinced of all these chain of events if he was an oc and not an si. Emposed, forced drama, this is what i see here.

    "This is not a sacrifice. It's a murder, one which you could have stopped," came the answer as the eldest brother stilled. A sense of anger and remorse filled his face for the first time as he voiced out.
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    The Burnt Prince-GOT SI
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X20d
    Commented

    you need to work on your action scenes, first watch a few medival fight videos on YouTube to have an idea of it, this is too bad

    "AGHH!" they both raised their blades and brought them down at the Prince, who finally showed a shift in his pace as he halted and raised his blade, blocking the swords of the Royal guards. One of them backed off and was about to attack again when the Prince moved once more, his steps a blur as he slid the guard's blade to the side and stepped behind him, slashing without a glance and cleaving the head off cleanly in a single strike.
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    The Burnt Prince-GOT SI
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X25d
    Posted

    forced drama, forced plot, forced interactions.

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    The Merchant Prince Viserys Targaryen SI (ASOIAF,GOT)
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X29d
    Replied to Heavenly_Devil

    If you re a religious people, the god you believe in created you and claims your soul to be judged and you don't have a way to permenantly end your existence, you re bound to the choices given to you, in this case you re as free as the amount of given choices. Freedom is always relative, it is about how much room you re given, it is conditional, you have no say in which age you re born, to which parents, or if you ll have a birth defect, your level of intelligence thus you re level of understanding , your options to choose a partner are limited, the rules, culture of the society you were born into are out of your control and you re personality, your aspirations, your expectations, the things you re ignorant of, values they are all shaped by that society, a muslim thinks a christian to believe in a bastardised religion, and a christian thinks a muslim has deviated from the path jesus has shown them, from the very moment they were both born their mind has always been trying to assimilate to the their culture, ignoring inconsistencies, the whys, justify , integrate so that they can fit. Our mind does not have the ability to discard, the things exposed to you one way or another affects your psyche and even if someone acquired enough self awareness to recognise these patterns they are still not free, no one is.

    "Not really, but a blacksmith creates swords sharper than his fingers, a child can surpass the parent, and a hammer will always hit harder than its creator's fists, so I can't see a reason for me to think I can't surpass my 'Creator,' whether it's a God or a Universe." 
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Replied to Heavenly_Devil

    There is no free will.

    "Not really, but a blacksmith creates swords sharper than his fingers, a child can surpass the parent, and a hammer will always hit harder than its creator's fists, so I can't see a reason for me to think I can't surpass my 'Creator,' whether it's a God or a Universe." 
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    it is a dumb thought, in order to care for someone in the first place you have to be vulnerable, by choice or circumstances, does not matter which, and to be vulnerable means, tolerance too, tolerance to being harmed, stupidity, audacity, etc. The claim that there is just those i care about that i protect, cherish, love, support and those i don't that i could not give an f about is just speaking from the middle of the book since at a certain point you did not care , or did not have the ability to care about the people you care now. This is denying the process and only accepting its result.

    "Remorse?" I smiled at Manager Kim. "I'm someone with clear priorities. For me, there are only two types of people. The ones who are precious to me, and the ones who can be disposed of for my good. Even if I didn't do anything, they would've died eventually without accomplishing much, so they might as well 'help' me with my goal." 
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    The way you describe the cure makes me think that you have very little knowledge of cancer.

    "Well, I did create it, but the cure has been around for many years, with it simply being hidden. After all, cancer is like a treasure trove for the government, and I just publicised it on a whim, along with a permanent cure that can be given to newborn children, effectively eradicating the problem of cancer after a generation or two."
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    Your poor portrayel of them is a pitiful thing.

    The emotional instability of a child is a powerful thing.
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    Side Character DxD
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    This author is a little delulu...

    Bowing my head, I say "Sorry, I wasn't listening at the start of the year, I don't actually know anybody's names. Sorry," I bow again to the rest of the class, the room full of first graders nods in understanding before going back to whatever it is that crayon munchers do in their spare time.
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    Side Character DxD
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    this is no child of 5 speaking,

    "Wha? I'm Matsuda! I've been sitting next to you for most of the year! How could you forget?" The child yells, alerting the entire class to the fact that I forgot his name.
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    Side Character DxD
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    This paragraph alone is enough to drop the story, it tells exactly what kind of story this will be.

    "My Lord, of our standing army of 2 thousand, we currently barely have 1200 men. Your father took our 200 elite guards alongside our best 100 men of our army. This included almost 60% of our veteran officers and commanders. The only Commander left is Ser Tytos River, and he has 0 experience as a Commander, we also only have about 10 experienced, 90 inexperienced and 20 higher ranked officers. Our men are only new men recently conscripted. Around 300 immediately left the army after our Lord died as they didn't believe you could lead them properly. And 4 patrols of 50 each was ambushed near Stones Hedge!"
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    Game Of Thrones: House Bracken
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    He should work at a gay brothel with the amount of testosterone leaking out of his presence.

    "I want this suit, not for myself, of course, but for someone who might work for me," I sit still on my sofa, too afraid to interrupt this very dangerous man.
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    The Rose (DC Universe Fanfic)
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Replied to Samot_Sempai

    When did you see his brain shot more then a few impulses at a second must be the real question.

    Only that I have no job and a gangster is telling me to leave the neighborhood, At least he's not threatening me to Leave Gotham Entirely.
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    The Rose (DC Universe Fanfic)
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Commented

    it takes effort to not use you brain to this degree,

    Wait, How does he know where I live?
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    The Rose (DC Universe Fanfic)
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  • DaoistH7599X
    DaoistH7599X1mth
    Replied to 4th_One

    judging by your comment history you might have Joculomania, highly recommendded you restrain yourself from internet and just stay a few week with real people, if it does not help go see professional help.

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    One Piece:The Lust System
    Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey
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