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Daoist6aIyWf

Daoist6aIyWf

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2021-04-03 JoinedGlobal
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    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Prologue - Three Ways to Survive in a Ruined World.
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    Omniscient Reader
    Urban · 싱숑
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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be "she" not he.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    it should be "He knew it"

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should "he broke" not "I broke".

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    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    The last part should be "I want"

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be "He's" and "him". Please have someone fix them.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    Naked? that's really weird 😕. he need to go see a therapist/psychologist.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be "girl"

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    Elise-sama? was this translated from Japanese? But, I thought that this novel was Korean.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    it should be "him" not me

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be "his life"

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be 'He's smiling as she is talking about the the MC not herself.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    It should be 'her face' as she is a woman.

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  • Daoist6aIyWf
    Daoist6aIyWf2yr
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    The boss monster embarrassed?

    How could he dash with that heavy desk? Obviously, the boss monster was embarrassed.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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