Jeb_F_Martin
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Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommentedIt went on further to clarify*
It went further to further clarify that it was a system of laws congregated together to keep this world alive, so I could also call it this world's Planetary System. I cut it down to System for short just to make it easier when I was addressing it- Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Change dead to death
Another dead for Ray. But this time, he died after obtaining many gains. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Master not monster
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Calm* down
"Everyone, come down. As long as we recover our strength we will go back into the fight with demon army," - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
That far**** not fat
"Huh? Why did he throw it from that fat?" When the demon general saw Ajax throw the spear from a long distance, the anxiousness in his heart disappeared without a trace and casually moved sideways and dodged the spear. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Reward you* heavily
"Excellent. You did a good job of informing me about this matter as soon as you can. But you don't need to worry about your reward. I promise to reward to heavily after we find her," - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Change To -> Two
"To more pill recipes to go," - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Support her until she*
There was also another reason he didn't want to move from his place and continued to support her was because the reason she was in her current condition was all because of him. So, he wanted to support her until he enters into the inner world on her own. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
They*
All of sudden he remembered something and became anxious while muttering in a low voice, "Thye are destroying my lightning strike." - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Correct to: ‘no use once’
Since he wanted to sneak up on Black yetis there was no uses one it saw him, so he stopped and became ready to dodge its attacks. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Should we*
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Most of its **
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… take it ‘for’ granted. Add the for
"I have strong reason to join game portal. When I submitted for the selection, I promised myself that no matter what I would not take it granted. I should get back what I lost." Ahram spoke determined. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Begin*
But before Yuan Tou could being to feel thrilled over this, he froze again. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Being should be changed to bring
But before Yuan Tou could being to feel thrilled over this, he froze again. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
More or less*
"More or last, sometimes it's longer, sometimes it's shorter. Even more interesting is that there's a branch of magic called Astrology on this planet, which is similar to astronomy on earth. The converging on the moons are usually calculated by astrologians. After the Single Moon Festival today, it will be autumn from tomorrow onward." Lolander rubbed his neck. He was only wearing a thin T-shirt, so he felt the chill as well. - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Change are to alright
"Are you little Crap! That hurt!" - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Who*
How could she save her? - Jeb_F_Martin2yrCommented
Practice*
In turn, Leo had also given Quinn a training routine to practise his Qi every day. For now, it would be pretty much useless in a fight, Leo explained, but at a certain point and time, everything would start to click.