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author should have this novel Game's extra, or i am the game hero's matchmaker. MC's only goal is to play matchmaker for the hero. and i think the author is a fan of romance drama( or whatever it's called) where FL have two or more men chasing and she dosent know which one to choose, she sometime shows interest in one then goes to another one(miellia)( That's kind of drama, which i really hate).
For me, the mc’s thinking is truly down in the drain. After all these, he surely knows his parents might be alive somewhere, the whole execution might be planned by his father and that anna has truly changed. But he still use her as an excuse of revenge. Or is he thinking, if he forgave her he will lose the motivation to improve himself?
Didn't thought wou would reply to me😂. I wasn't even serous while writing that coments. Well, first even if you ditched them. I won't leave the novel with a review with one star Because its really been an interesting novel till now. And author if you ever plan to ditch them please have a solid reason for it. Not because MC was a simp. the reason about not giving the review. I rearly give reviews to the novels only if I really like them. And if I don't then I'll just remove them from library and that's the end. So telling you that I will give one star review is that Im really interested in your story. Lastly don't tell me you stopped working on your other novel samsara online.
Hey author! From the efforts you have been putting in describing the three girls from the bigining of the novel. If you even ditched a single girl from them. Then.. .I.... Will.... Ditch..this...novel..with.. .one star... Review!!( I know a single review won't even do any thing to the novel 😅😔😔) So better not ditch them in future.
Don't know what to rate this novel as I'm still on early chapters But author! If ever you write a new novel please don't add too much information which does not have any relation or sense to the story. Like if MC has to walk to the building next door and the time MC reach that building chapter is completed. Like in this novel, the information which can be leasily described at most 2 paragraphs you are describing that on whole chapters by adding as if Mc is thinking if he had done this that scenerio would have happened he regret doing this bla bla bla. You are not WRITTING an essay. So, don't destroy your novel by adding too much nonsense. 🙏