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m_P3rch3hCommentedThis sentence does not make sense…
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Another what? Reason?
"There is another why I won't kill you." - m_P3rch5hCommented
Gunning? Or guinea?
I was gunning Pig, he was testing whether or not I would survive. - m_P3rch5hCommented
Is he referring to his daughter as Satan? Or should it be her name instead?
"If you want to enter Satan take Adele as an escort. That's the only way I can allow you to go, Satan. If you don't like it you can stay here." - m_P3rch5hCommented
Saitan again?
'Looking at the atmosphere, it seems that attacking the unexplored dungeon was also trying to claim the right to enter Saitan.' - m_P3rch5hCommented
It was Satan. Is it now Saitan?
Saitan is a place where you don't know when you will die, It's like you were consistently holding a time bomb… - m_P3rch5hCommented
Saitan or Satan?
That's why I didn't like Saitan. - m_P3rch5hCommented
„.,“? Full stop comma?
Finally, the silence was broken by Cale's voice., Rene's eyes shook as she heard Cale's words. - m_P3rch5hCommented
Gust or guest?
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Vale or Cale?
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„Seconds Minutes?“ or „Seconds? Minutes?“
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And now you miss punctuation. Please at least reread the stuff you are posting. This is literally the first paragraph of the chapter. How can you not see a mistake here?
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You are literally missing words… do you even reread chapters before publishing them?
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Laughter or language?
(A/N- Any dialogue with the * sign at the beginning and the end indicates that another laughter is being spoken) - m_P3rch2dCommented
„It due“, not „due it“
This paragraph has been deleted. - m_P3rch2dCommentedCh 102 A serious conversation
- m_P3rch4dCommentedCh 169 Chapter 165 - Schemes And Plots
- m_P3rch7dCommentedCh 76 What's In The Cloak