Well thought out storyline. developing the characteristics of each character along the way. I often read paranormal romance, as well as other types of a story. Although I this is not in that Genre, I appreciate the flow of the storyline. I look forward to finishing the book.

I would prefer a smoother flow of storyline . Seems to jump around and not in a way that matches with main storyline . I thInk it has the potential to be an excellent read.

I enjoy the characters and plot, However, I do not like being expected to buy coins to continue reading the book. The author does a good job at developing the characters and for the most part the storyline flows smoothly.

It has potential if author avoids some of the pitfalls a lot of writers fall into when Developing similar plots/storyline .

It was hard for me to engage in the story. maybe because it was first chinese romance, or storyline. Therefore, I cannot give a positive or negative review. The part of the stroyline I attempted to get inested in appeared an average storyline I have read several times before; therefore i can be neutral on this book. possibly a good read for those who are interested in this genre of literature.