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Mizu_Moon2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: A wolf in sheep's clothes- Mizu_Moon2yrCommented
it really sets an image in my head
I glanced out the car window, at the wet rolling green pastures that laid out farther than the eye could see. I look down at my lap messing with the ruffles on my skirt. After a while the sleek black cars pass the iron gate of my uncle's estate. Guards with guns stood still against the brick wall that encased the manor that laid inside. A shiver ran down my spine. I was staying with him since he was the only family I had left and from what I heard he was very wealthy. I have never seen him before in my life, but I had no choice. Being only fifteen, it wasn't my option. The black car comes to a halt in front of the massive manor. Grabbing my luggage that sat beside me, I got out of the car. It was still raining, in a sad attempt to get out of the rain. I ran to the door, accidently stepping in a deep puddle, which soaked my shoes completely. Knocking on the front door, a maid answers. She looked surprised and quickly let me in. - Mizu_Moon2yrCommented
the opening is wonderful!!!!
There's always two sides, two sides in every story. Good, Evil, Hunter, Prey, Human, Monster. Most people say it's your own choice and yes I somewhat agree, but it sometimes isn't. You never know how your life will turn out. It can change in a matter of seconds. You can try predicting it, but you can't prevent it. - Mizu_Moon2yrReplied to Kat_curtiss